Cinematic Game Icon-Character-Dr.Jones

[Aearon]

damn cool idea, i'm looking forward to your 3D version of that great sketch :D

i don't like the idea of bikes though, i don't think a samurai would like the idea of restricting his movements with such a machine, or fighting using anything but his sword for that matter... but noone needs to be that rational if it's cool :cool:

[Dr.Jones]

This is what I have modeled do far. I noticed porblem with proportion. yeah she has huge feet, but that's what I want, but legs are too long for this body. As you can see I started the boots first. These are supposed to give her some "matrix" abilities, like walking on the wall or mega-jumping. I'm style looking for a background story.

[Dr.Jones]

back view. What could make it better?Do not hesitate to give crits

[mtmckinley]

very nice so far. :)

[Kozlow]

Hi Dr Jones great modeling i like the shoes and the body is nice as well. Nothin to crit keep going.
Good luck
Kamil:thumbsup: :beer:

[Aearon]

"What could make it better?"

nothing except finishing it :thumbsup:

[dominicqwek]

woah ho ho. I love those boots. Especially the grilles at the heels.
:thumbsup:

[AJ]

Looking great!

Very very cool boots... :D

[Dr.Jones]

thank you for comments, very optimistic, so it make me want going further. I'll try to follow Fist's advise

[Asgar]

Cool boots and design!!!!!:buttrock: :buttrock: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Virtuoso]

Excellent start Dr.Jones. I think the story can evolve as you move forward with the creation of your character,it can be explained as you go perhaps?

I think once you give her that all important head the legs will be in porportion with the entire body. Plus some far fetched exxagerated parts are welcome,even more interesting than true to life proportions,at least in some cases.

Very clean modeling,nice shape & curves to her body,nice to look,and the boot design is very interesting and well thought out.Perhaps you can add some kind of humor to the overall character and scene with an added device,but first the character OK.;)

Well have fun,it's a very nice start,I hope to see you get her to the finish line as beautiful at the end as you have her now at the start.:thumbsup: :beer:

[Dr.Jones]

Thank a lot for your comments Virtuoso, very constructuve and helpfull. Excuse me if my english isn't perfect, but I understood most of what you said.

here is an update, and I'll go to bed or have drink , don't know:beer:

Her breast are not so small finally. You know, once you start to model boobs, they always become bigger, don't know why. Same with her ass. But they are ok, far from Lara Croft or Dead or Alive chicks.

I'm still waiting to model arms. I'm hesitating bitween different design. Her dress need more details of course, but I'll do that tomorow, I'm enough now

[Dr.Jones]

back view

[Aearon]

woops.. double post :D

now it's even starting to look sexy! the shape of the body is excellent.. i like the way the dress stretches over the body :D

[Kozlow]

Hi therw its going jus greeeeaaat I love her already.:thumbsup:
Keep on
Good luck witj the chalange
Kamil:beer: :bounce: :thumbsup:

[Virtuoso]

Originally posted by Dr.Jones

Her breast are not so small finally. You know, once you start to model boobs, they always become bigger, don't know why. Same with her ass. But they are ok, far from Lara Croft or Dead or Alive chicks.




Yes size does matter............as long as the shape remains perfect too. Don'y worry about comparisons,I think you have a wonderful beginning,to me it's already original,it's your version of a beautiful babe warrior,nothing wrong with that.When she is finished you can add some fun gadget or two to give more originality and creativity.

I think that her shape should not be covered too much with details,the dress and curves of her natural body are detailed fine enough,don't cover her natural beauty,perhaps like the boots you can give the extra attention to details on the arms,or wrists,weapons, head gear etc,etc...,but let's keep the beautiful body un-covered shall we


;) :p



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[fellah]

waw, brrr.. very sexy indeed :drool: :D really, very nice curves/shapes! no crits yet, I'll follow this one!

[Kozlow]

That is a nice shape.Buttocks sre hmmmmmmm
they are in the place:)
Kamil :bounce: :applause: :beer:

[antnik]

Wowww...:bounce: :bounce: :beer:

[hypercube]

Crikey! I almost missed this one..she's looking badass. Definitely a great Battle Angel vibe. I really like her form and clingy dress. The boots are pretty rockin' too. Kinda Feng-y.

I think the breast size is fine, though hard to tell from the angles, perhaps it looks large compared to her upper body as a whole? I bet once you get the big shoulder armor and 'powergloves' in there it'll balance back out though, plus as a stylized look it's wonderful.

Keep em comin'..will be glued to the monitor watching this one :D :thumbsup:

[BlueCougar]

Awesome form on that model. I'm looking forward to seeing it fill out the rest of the way.

:thumbsup:

[Dr.Jones]

update

Kinda Feng-y.

True. I forgot to say that, I love everything Feng Zu made (who doesn't), and I also thought about is work when I made this one.

I tried this for the arm: one mecanic, and the other made of flesh, with a glove probably. Arms are not weilded to the body yet, because I must weild both part of this one first, and it's not finished.

The skin hand is temp, I grabbed it from another character, to see how it would look, I'll model a new better one soon

[Dr.Jones]

While I was working on the body I was thinking about How I could model the sword the way I would like it, with this kind of blade bellow. I had an idea, and wanted to apply it before I forget, so here is the result, still edit poly with mes smooth.

[swag]

i love the style - cool stuff -

[Ingram]

Wow that looks really sweet. I love the concept and the big boots. That sword is really tight too. Watching intently :)

[Dr.Jones]

Woohoo head is almost done!

[Dr.Jones]

sorry for quality, you know, attachement size limit, so small... but I understand.

[Aearon]

hehe nice style.. you'll texture it too right ? :D

put it on the body!

*edit* ooops i'm too fast.. the second shot is even better :thumbsup:

[Dr.Jones]

Answer already!

I wait to finish body to put it on. I'm not satisfied with the arms, I'll probably remove the mecanic arm, I don't realy like it. What do you guy think? should I keep it? Should I give her two mech arms, or should I remove it definitly, and add some kind of gloves

[Aearon]

yeah i didn't really like the arm either, i think it takes away from the sexiness ;)
i wouldn't completely remove, but maybe you want to make it less massive, you could shape it like a mechanic glove.

[Dr.Jones]

Yeah I'm going to do that, thank.

[Erik]

Hey, good start Dr.Jones, i particulary like the face expresion of this beautiful girl ;)

[BladeFX]

Realy nice style.
I like the mech arm.

Waiting to see more :bounce:

[Dr.Jones]

Rah, I was almost convinced that I had to remove this mech arm, and now someone (bladeFX) tells me it's good. What should I do?

Anyway here is the body, with head. I'll to work a bit mor on the neck I think, because it looks too thin

[Dr.Jones]

one more

[Dr.Jones]

and last

[Kozlow]

Hi @Dr Jones,
i realy like your model, she has her own style very good modeling and desing:thumbsup: About mech arm i would leave it cuz it looks good with the rest of the char. I like the size of the chest , i think we all got tired of the overlarged tits. Nice and subtle.
:beer: :thumbsup:
Take care and good luck
Kamil

[Magnusv]

very nice,clean,one of the best so far.Like the modeling,the design too.But that hat I think has to go,just way off,to me at least.But still looking nice.:thumbsup:

[Joebount]

Ca quichouille, ça quichouille ! :thumbsup: :buttrock:

[Dr.Jones]

Hm sorry Magnusv, but I really want to keep that hat, because the challenge is an Icon, someone or something you can reconize as soon as you see it. You know, red cap = Mario, big boobs an pony tail = lara croft... This hat is a very specific part of the model, and if I remove it, it just going to be another chick. So, mine is named Sadako (Yeah I know, not very original), and should be reconizable thank to her hat and her boots.

What do you think about it guys?
I think there are very good entries, as usual, but some might not be so iconic characters, while that's what is asked. You know, I had a look at most of the entries, and when I saw some, I say, "yeah well done, but it's just another orc", that's what I'm trying to avoid, so I'll keep this hat, because that's what make her different from other chicks (in my opinion, maybe I'm wrong)

For exemple, Joebount made a kool character (you're cheating, you're four working on the same project! :D ), because it's different from anything posted here

Well sorry for all this, just to say I won't remove this hat :p

[Joebount]

Originally posted by Dr.Jones
For exemple, Joebount made a kool character (you're cheating, you're four working on the same project! :D ), because it's different from anything posted here

No, I'm not, allowed in the rules ! You're just jalous because nobody loves you ! :p

Keep the had screwed on her head ! :buttrock:

[Apt Pupil]

I like the hat to:) But something is seriously wrong with her upper arms. They are extremely wide compared to her shoulders, Perhaps making them more thinner and more proportioned, and maybe making the shoulders bigger could fix this. Of course, I am not entirely sure how to fix this, but, that area just needs some tweaking. Otherwise, the boots are to die for, I love the design. And I like her arm gauntlet too. Her perportions in general are great!!

One last thing I find kind of wierd might be her face. Perhaps her forhead and cheek lines (between her nose and cheeks. . . whatever that's called) is just a 'little' to pronounced.

Otherwise, very, very, very nice!! Looking forward to seeing more!

:beer:

[Dr.Jones]

You're just jalous because nobody loves you

Yeah, it's probably that, I need a girlfriend.

[Martyr]

Wow very good model so far, very good design and keep the hat like this its good too,I will looking back for the story...continue

[LEEBLEEB]

nice robotic shoes, the hat suits the style of model. :thumbsup

Will she have a weapon like a katana or somthin?

[Wolfzbane]

Like Jelwa said, it's nice to see a female model without oversized mammalian protruberances. Very nice style, and kinda sexy too (Damn, I think I'm droolin' again...). My only gripe is the polygonal edges on the hat, since everything else is so smooth it just jumped out at me. But I like the hat too, I'd say keep it, but maybe add a little something to it so it demarks itself from a Frizbee. Top contender in my book.

[Colin de bink]

damn that is real cool
That hair is amazing
keep it comming :bounce:

[H13]

woow :eek:

*jaw drops......stays down.*

[ChrRambow]

Looking very good so far!
seems to be a small latex dress right?
I would buy this game ;)

:applause:

[digital_rhino]

Great work Doc! Though I too agree there is something odd about her upper arms. They seem too large and and almost curved. Thats the only thing I notice...everything else is beautiful!:bounce: :bounce:

[nastacc]

really nice modeling :applause: . her body is perfect and those boots kill :beer: !!!

[swag]

this is my favorite at this time - great style,modeling and the face and hair looks superb - i like that u put so much character to the face she looks alive with much anger ready to fight

[the Rev.]

My 2 cents?

Wonderful model!!!! But I would loose the mech-glove - not sexy enough. A great challenge would be to make a sexy mech-glove...

Also... KEEP THE HAT! Adds great character.

-g

[Gamoron]

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: beautiful and badass! Great job and skills! Can't wait to see her posed. You are going to pose her right?

[Mangled Poly]

this is looking so amazing! awesome stuff man

[swag]

i will push up my favorite - i hope to see an update or a pose

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