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Title: Retirement Home
Name: Wie San Lok
Country: United Kingdom
Software: 3ds max, AutoCAD, Photoshop, VRay
Retirement home from a different view with a proposed green cladding.
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lostxian
09-25-2008, 09:50 PM
looks clean.. very nice!
A-Boy-From-Heaven
09-25-2008, 10:40 PM
It's overally good.
More details and less regularity in tillings could have made it much better.
And I think the trees seem not planted correctly :shrug:
oldblaggard
09-26-2008, 01:37 AM
I have to say that while the scene looks nice overall, the trees and the textures on the buildings frustrate me. The trees are all very clearly the same model, while the textures are very flat and hardly have any dimension to them; I feel that they should have at least some, even if you are going for a clean, straight look.
ipdesigner
09-26-2008, 08:18 AM
This is nicely done especially the lighting however some of the entourages are unrealistic like the bushes. Just a nitpick though and I know you could do better than that.
Congrats.:)
Macca23
09-26-2008, 08:59 AM
Hey,
Nice new piece mate, keep up the good work!!
RED-VERTEX
09-26-2008, 11:37 AM
... The trees are all very clearly the same model, while the textures are very flat and hardly have any dimension to them; I feel that they should have at least some, even if you are going for a clean, straight look.
Add some bump and displace.
Add ppl. Crouded would be better to me.
Cheers!
Thanks for all the constructive comments!
I couldn't really see the mistakes, until someone points it out to you, so thanks again.
As for the detail your absolutely right, it does require some level of detail to the building. Also the hedges could have been improved but hey, it was just a box with a displacement.
anyway just going to update it with slight amendments to the comments.
Thank you all!
USERNAME81
10-09-2008, 04:20 PM
Hi, I heared from a friend that you didn't do any of your images?
is that true?
Plagiarism is illegal.
LOL...that is so funny..Not true at all!!
Some of the modeling was split into two's, Myself and Chris Williams, apart from that
I set up all camera views, materials (apart from 1 material) Light setup and photoshop!
So who is this so called friend of yours? Who are you?? apart from USERNAME81?? obviously your trying to hide your identity! Be a man and stop hiding behide the computer making wild accusations! Do you or your friend have any post production process of the retirement home??? from original, mid and end result? I would really like to see the stages from beginning to end!
Plagiarism is illegal and I couldn't agree more, however, I can genuine say they are my images!
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