Short film - Tempus Fugit

[mistasam02]

That was a cool concept! I thought it ended pretty abruptly and there wasn't really any twist or resolution, but cool idea. :D

[David-J]

Interesting piece.

A couple of comments that distracted me a little bit. First thing the hair of the character. In my opinion it's out of place. It's too "realistic" for the cartoony environment and characters of the piece.
Watch out for geometry popping out and color changes in your geo. Watch out for the flickering in the grass.
Too much symmetrical poses.
The character movements seemed a little bit stiff.

Hope this helps for future projects.

Best of luck!

[dreadkiller]

Thanks for you helpful comment !
We had a lot of problem to render the grass and hair because of memory.
I'm not satisfied with the character animation but I learned a lot in working on this film !
I hope I'll be better next time :)

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