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avneriginal
09-23-2008, 01:17 PM
Hey guys,
How's it going?

I started another test and I was hoping to get some feeback off you guys.

Feel free to rip it apart.


http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/2008/09/23/the-sneeze-flipbook/

Cheers,

Av

KyleG
09-23-2008, 02:25 PM
its a good start, you need to exaggerate the anticipation of the sneeze at frame 187 much more and probably hold it longer, sneezes are all about anticipation. Keep up the good work

lewistaylor
09-23-2008, 07:50 PM
Hey Avner,

Yeah, I agree with Kyle. Maybe hold it for couple of seconds, really build
the up the sneeze. At the moment he looks like he's not too fussed at
sneezing, sort of like he's not trying to hold it in at all.

The other dudes reaction may need a bit of work. If I was reading the paper
on the tram and you sneezed on me, I'd be all WTF?

Really digging your work mate, I just recently starting buying the Jason Ryan tuts.
They are exactly what I needed, a walkthrough of how a pro goes about setting up
a shot.

How's Torus going? I'm half way through making my reel, but have been reluctant to
put games companys on the list of places to send it to. Are you having a good time
and learning much there?

Lewis

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