Uglybeauty

[CybrGfx]

Damn rough anatomy on this one, mate.

Did you use a reference?

~C

[TedNindo]

cool, I'm amazed how clear your shapes are defined and on the same time you keep all the formes very smooth. It almost looks like 3D rendered, but maybe just because of the grayish colors.

[TrenchcoatPixie]

Well...please don't take this as a comment on your worth as a human being, but she looks like an ugly cross-dresser made out of molded plastic. If that wasn't your intention, I think you should spend some time studying female facial anatomy and then working on your textures.

You've clearly put a fair bit of work into the final polish, here, so I hesitate to make any specific suggestions for how it could be improved, since it'd take a pretty drastic overhaul and I doubt you want that at this point. Come here earlier in the development cycle next time, maybe?

[smas]

First I must say it´s a overpaint of a 3d-model I´m working on.
At the end of the day I just messed upp a female head and photoshoped over it.
So that plastic and symetri feel comes from there.
I have no goal with this.
Posted it here to see if someone had fun ideas on a development.

TrenchcoatPixie: No problem at all!
I had the same feeling that this look kind of androgyne (My english suck and I hope you understand me). Uglybeauty summes it up.
Feel free to overhaul it any way you want. It would be interesting.

All critique is welcome! I dont think there is bad critique. you know what I mean

thanks

[CybrGfx]

First I must say it´s a overpaint of a 3d-model I´m working on.
At the end of the day I just messed upp a female head and photoshoped over it. So that plastic and symetri feel comes from there.That explains a LOT.I have no goal with this.
Posted it here to see if someone had fun ideas on a development.Yes. Trash it, start again, and have a GOAL with it. In General, this is for Works In Progress, NOT "I made this doodle in 3d, and it is messed up, so I painted it in Photoshop, and want you guys to make it into something decent." NO. The old computer saying of "Garbage in, garbage out," applies to bad art, too. If it starts out as a pointless, messed up portrait, guess what? It will stay a pointless, messed up portrait, no matter how many hundreds of hours someone puts into it.

Also, we all have enough messed up works of our own, so you won't find many volunteers here, or on almost any other forum, willing to take yours and paintover it "for fun."
Critiques and paintovers are usually given to those with a real question or issue they are trying to solve, not pointless doodles requesting overhauls. Take 5 minutes and read some of the other threads in this forum, perhaps you'll understand a bit better.

As for your original 3d, yeah it's messed up. Study up on basic facial anatomy, and do some online tuts. Those features are wonky beyond belief, and that is almost a basic, to learn (or be able to observe) the placement and proportions of human facial features...

~C

[smas]

CybrGfx:
Well... I dont request anything.

Sorry to have taken up your time with my bad art.
I´ll try to delete this thread

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