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hovito
09-18-2008, 10:29 PM
I'm just starting to get into animation.
Although I did a few other Digital Tutor lessons this is my first 'freestyle' .
I wanted to try something that had more complicated movement (twisting & jumping).

http://www.vimeo.com/1713525

Any C & C welcome

JayG
09-24-2008, 04:28 PM
Cool man, very Capoeria-ish. He is off balance quite a bit during the kick, watch plenty of reference and you'll notice even mid-spin your body still needs to be balanced.

Try to break up the body a bit by having some parts move at different times, he is very stiff and moving like a robot at the moment.

The settle at the end has him kind of "snapping" back into place like he is spring loaded, give it a little more time at the end for a more natural settle.

Good luck!

hovito
09-25-2008, 08:37 PM
Thanks for the comments JayG
I'll try to tweak the balance a bit more.

enian82
10-01-2008, 12:51 AM
Cool job frank
What is this rig called ?
cheers
Yesh

zj8264
10-08-2008, 04:33 PM
more power would be better. just imagine there standing a foe in front of him!

hovito
10-09-2008, 02:43 PM
zj8264, that's an interesting point that I hadn't thought of.
In my reference footage the martial artist was just doing a demo routine. Do you think adding a powerful pop to all kicks is better than smooth spinning motions?

zj8264
10-10-2008, 05:13 AM
I like smooth motion too,but i think it base on right timing. in your animation, i prefer kicking fast.do you have some basic animation,such as walk cycle or run cycle ? we can discuss it together, develop together.

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