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fizzgig
06-05-2003, 05:01 PM
Personal portfolio piece. Created in Illustrator 9.0.2 on Mac OSX. I was thinking of doing a series of cartoony pin-ups...Kindle is the first...

http://www.johnschwegel.com/portfolio/kindle.jpg

Let me know your thoughts

victor throe
06-05-2003, 05:05 PM
that is beautiful

erm....this may seem silly......but that nipple is really over powering


your eye follows the flow of the image and settles on it

distracting


id make it ever so slightly more subtle

less of a corner between boob and nip

EighthDecay
06-05-2003, 05:11 PM
hehehe nipples,,

I love it,, awesome style also. :)

TheGreenGiant
06-06-2003, 03:00 AM
Damnit, and I've been meaning to learn illustrator too. That looks sweetsor!!! love

fizzgig
06-06-2003, 03:52 AM
thanx for the comments. so...I should make her nips bigger then? :drool:

3danim8d
06-06-2003, 04:15 AM
Wonderful piece, I really like the style and color pallete.

Please do more work in this style.

tgialdini
06-06-2003, 07:11 AM
I like it alot... nice style.

I agree with the nipple comment tho... it needs to be integrated with the breast a little more... it is a little distracting... pencil eraser nipple and all...

/cheers

:beer:

MedusasHead
06-06-2003, 08:29 AM
Her facial expression and the overall color style just ROCK!!!!!
You are planning to do a series of these? Where will the gallery be? Oh please, give us a link! :p

Volcandro
06-06-2003, 08:31 AM
Yessss I like it. Very clean job with a great style. If you have other like this send it !

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