First time vehicle modeling......

[joy1856]

wow,,,looks very very cool!!!:applause:

[RmachucaA]

gj, maybe try to get some sharper edges.

[icr82nz]

i agree on the sharper edges. very nice model though. two things i noticed are the headlights seem hollow and it appears there is no moulding or trim around the windows. need something to seperate the materials so the windows are more distinguished from the rest. lovely modeling keep it up:thumbsup:

[dbluewolf]

Sweet. The body looks okie, the wheel is good, but perhaps the tyre is not perfect. In real life tyres cannot be so smooth. Because then it can not move stealthily. May be you should have a look at the real tyre again.
I agree about the lightholders, but i think you did not have enough time for it.
By the way, what happens if it rains? Does this car brand has special features for it? Or u overlook it?

Hope you understand what i mean. Sorry for my bad english.

[Kwills84]

you're lighting looks very good.. but I like shiny cars.. nice concept too. I'd like to see an interior in it, just for a little more realism/believability. And what he said about the window trim..

rims look nice, but also look like the holes aren't cut all the way through, from that angle. I would at least make them slightly different color than the car.

nice job!

[TheGhostDragon]

its really good
the edge next to the door ... from front to back the thickness changes ... I think its too thick at the back side unless you intended to do that ....
but its really nice ...

[RmachucaA]

one more thing is the bolt pattern is way to large for the car, it seems as if it was 5 x 160, when in reality its more like 5x114.3 or 5x112, also the lugnuts seem a bit too rounded and too big.

[attar-khoje]

hello pll,

thanks very much for your valuable critics..:) Surely they will help me to improve my skill....But now I am just trying out different type of texturing. I am not trying to do any photo realistic stuff.....some more criticism might help again...:P

peace

http://images.deviantart.com/large/designs/d3d/Alfa_Test_rendering.jpg

[Darakusan]

woo nice lightings and car...

but i noticed something seems wrong for the top of the windscreen..
u see that??

keep up the gd work:applause:

[icr82nz]

looks great, but the door looks funky, maybe its the lighting

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