Helena the Archer, Marthin Agusta Simny (3D)

[dEDa]

She's beautiful!
dEDa

[leemale]

The attention to detail in this is awesome! If I have one minor crit, it is that the pose could contain more tension. That bow doesn't look as though it requires much effort to draw. Fantastic work, all the same!

[FabioMSilva]

great work!

[l2k]

ok i love the picture and she's really hot :)

but heres some observations :

something wrong with the wrist.
having a bird on the arm is not that recomended for precise shot
should extend a finger as a guide for the arrow
she doesnt look to make effort to bend the bow
and i definely love that bow.

[derex]

5 Star...Perfect
good skill modeling...this artwork is the most beautiful CG Character i ever seen..(keren bos)..
one shoot and bingo...........:)...............vote for cg choice gallery(3D)....

[DarkLimit]

-Wonderful texturing and models....I really like her armor and the bird!!

[aesis412]

great character nice color scheme on your textures and the modeling is superb
5 stars

[floatingrunner]

pretty nice design you have there :)

[svenger]

A pretty cool character. Nice concept and design. I like her very much.

[mrR]

B E A U T I F U L

[nellement]

Great job ,very nice armor design!

[DizzyJ]

I love the way you've worked the falcon motif into the armor. Great work

[sir-j]

wonderfull work, realy hot girl. facial expression and general feel also great.
texturing is really well done ower the whole composition and its werry creative.
only thing i can see in terms of critisism is a question if not the torso anatomicly is a bit thick.
But i salute you! keep up the great work

[cyberjobe]

Great render! 4*

[MCHammond]

I logged in just to post 5 stars ***** :D

I love this image, she looks like a friend of mine. The exspression alone is perfect, naughty but fun.

My only crit, is on the falconry side of things "i used to do falconry so im being nitty" her falcon has no jess's or anklets meaning you could'nt stop it from flying off and attacking random wildlife.

The heroin also does not have the right equipment, she should be wearing a glove or gauntlet else the falcon might try and eat her hand once its talons drew blood, confusing it for a reward! "you only use the wrong hand once!" she should also have a swing lure to get the bird back once it did its scouting else it might just stay away all day till its board.

Here is some of what you need:
http://cache.eb.com/eb/image?id=66611&rendTypeId=4

Hope this helps :P

[vfx]

thats a lovely falcon! :)

[LadyPurple]

She's beautiful! Great job

[LukeZ]

greate details beutiful face...render & job :D

[threedsquid]

wow..thanks for the replies guys..i really appreciate it :)
dEDA, leemale, FabioMSilva : thanks alot!

l2k : well, actually the falcon is in mid air, so he's still flying but almost land on her arm ( sorry bout my english haha ) thank you for your input, i will definetely point that the next time i make an archer :)

derex : wow youre here too :D thanks for the support man..really nice to hear feedback from you :D

DarkLimit, aesis412, floatingrunner, svenger, mrR, Nellementz, DizzyJ, cyberjobe : thank you very much! this really makes my day :D

sir-j : thank you for the comments and critics! :)

MCHammond : thanks alot for your explanation :) i wish i had those references before i made this artwork :P i will surely do some research for my next artwork :) thanks again!

vfx, LadyPurple : thank you!

and heres some detail shot of her, its all in 100% resolution

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3271/2841944384_01987afabc_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3283/2841111359_4677d43b61_o.jpg

[Philip-Vampire]

amazing work dude... :thumbsup:

[suffibutt]

woaaaoaoa, nice work, good fine detail,

SHE IS GIVING FRIENDLY SMILE,
ITS A GOOD SMILE BUT WITH BOW??


thanks to share..

[rraj]

Great work.Render is too good.

[souledge3]

ohhh fantastic job i liked it so much :applause:

[Bobby]

very impressive work :applause:

[neosushi]

Wonderful work. I really love the details you have put in this image.

GREAT :)

[coolnesses]

very nice love to see the wireframes of themodels

[TheRazorsEdge]

Exceptional work!:applause:

Small crits: That arrow is about 2 inches too short and would fall off. Currently the arrowhead would severely cut her fingers going both ways. The string is penetrating her right index finger! ;)

[Noomnory]

:shrug:

How you set Vray Skin shader ?

I m tried, It's can't

[eonridr]

Wow Marthin, Amazing character concept so beautiful great job man! love the closeups!

[DavidStokes]

What an amazing image, I love it.

Is this for a new game or just for yourself?

[schizo]

teteeeeep...keren bos! :applause:

[far]

amazing work, 5 * for sure :)

[adoracion3D]

Really great and beautifull ! Congrats.

Cu,
Jeff

[carlmentier]

nice character render

[chindian]

Awesome character man! I love it! Good detailing and the modeling looks really awesome. Love the hawk too!! Nice touch!

Keep it up! 5 stars from me!

[flashfight]

Amazing! Very nice textures and modeling as everyone else has stated.

A few crits: As an avid archer I noticed a few issues with the pose. She's twisting way too much (she should be aiming roughly where her left foot is pointing) making her seem kind of precariously posed and off balance, it feels like she'll fall over as soon as the falcon lands. Another thing I noticed is the bow is not drawn (as leemale and l2k pointed out), the string is stretched like an elastic band. The arrow is also on the wrong side of the bow and too short she'll get a nice gash on her finger should she ever release (as TheRazorsEdge mentioned). Should you ever make another archer these might come into play.

Really these are super minor and don't destroy the model or composition in any way, it truly is amazing. Nice job.

[Rofideo]

Amazing and nice

Please post a wire, this has a lot to learn from

Thanks you

[iKAL]

Really good job overall, especially the falcon.

[threedsquid]

hi and thanks for the replies
PhilipVampire : thanks again man, i learned alot from you :D
suffibutt : haha..yes, she's a friendly assasin Lol
rraj, souledge3, bobby, neosushi, coolness : thank you so much

TheRazorsEdge : yes, i realize i have some issues with the position of the bow and arrow..i wil pay more attention to it if i ever do an archer in my next projects.. thanks!

Noomnory : sure, here's my settings..
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3089/2845047338_1838b56d44_o.jpg

eonridr : thankyou for your kind words :)

DavidStokes : thanks, it's only for my own portfolio :)

schizo : wow, youre here too hahaha...makasih dah diplug ya mbah :D

far, adoracion3D, carlmentier, chindian : thanks alot!

flashfight : thanks for the comments and input, I really appreaciate that :D .
As i said before, i really wish i have all your input before i put her in the final scene, so that i would never made those mistakes. But then i guess ill just have to do some proper research for my next artwork

Rofideo, iKAL : thank you.. and here's some wires :)

[threedsquid]

oops i forgot the wire..
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3086/2844967254_2edf73e514_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3174/2844967256_b6139fc3a0_o.jpg

[cenkkara]

Very good work !

[dhome76]

wow!!!

5 stars from me!

[AngelNegro]

Very good job Great Model !!! :thumbsup:

[darukin]

Wow, great! I think it's brilliant ! *****

[crazydragonclk]

i love the whole outfit, its busy looking and very fantasy like

[AngelNegro]

Very good model, good work !:thumbsup:

[Hecatomb]

My major crits on this image would be on the bow and the arrow. Looking at the length of the string and how far it's drawn, the bow should be bent a big deal further. Bow strings are not elastic, all of the firepower comes from the bow itself. But this bow doesn't look like it's been drawn one bit.

My second crit, although this is more of a nitpick really, would be on the arrow; it's a bit too short. Typical arrows still extend a couple of inches when fully drawn, the tip should by no means touch the finger. This is because when you release the string, you actually pull it back a slight bit further before your fingers slide off. Your character isn't even in a firing position yet, and already she's drawn her arrow to the max. Right now, she'd drop the arrow or in the worst scenario injure her fingers. Also, the arrow isn't resting on anything, so if she'd release the string it'd probably miss by miles or, again, hurt her fingers. Or even her foot.

Just some things I noticed being three-times-in-a-row provincial champion in archery. :)

[johnstrieder]

Great Work! This should be at least Frontpage!

[NinjaSkills]

Wow, beautiful model. Love the bow.

[quaam]

The model is beautiful and I love the color palette that you chose. Great job! :cool:

[Sinyendil]

i really like this image man
these are my favorite type of characters in the 3d universe man
it´s been a while since a saw one i liked as much as i like this one

congrats man! and thanks for the image!

[ydsh04]

wonderfull

[polybuilder]

fantastic!!

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