Cinematic Game Icons - Character - dom

[dodo3d]

I like the sketches
it seems to be a nice character ,keep going:beer:

[dominicqwek]

tks dodo. But it seems i've hit a mindblock. Gonna revamp certain aspects of this design. :banghead:

Last thing i wanna do is to head into modelling without a complete and final design.

[dominicqwek]

I've decided to go with a toned down design, just wanna make sure i finish this piece on time. There are details of her suit that has been left out, i wanna concentrate on her head gear, arms and feet as well overall body proportions. Finally i can do some modelling! :D

[jocko]

Nice concept Dom... Has a ton of potential for the gaming market.

Has a high :drool: factor as well.

Good work.

[KotsVlok]

yes yes, if you finish this model completly with al the little details, i'm seeing you as a great winner :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

I'm subscribing also to this thread, i'm anxcious (typo?:surprised ) what you're gonna make of it :applause:

[chucy©]

looking realy nice :thumbsup:

can´t wait to see how u gonna work this out....:bounce:

btw i like female characters!

[dominicqwek]

yikes! you guys are giving me pressure..:D but its all good i guess. I really want to finish this piece too. One thing i've learnt is to stick to a finalised design as much as possible. And thats one of the things that i've always failed to do in the past with my models...somehow they turn out looking different.

Here's the background story:

The year is 2999(yes i know very cliche :p ) and the world is splitted into 2 rivaling continents. Ashley belongs to the order that believes in freedom and liberty while her opposition is bent on world domination in order to exercise a total communistic reign. Warfare is often conducted using the help of wardroids and AI, man has total control of technology. In that world and age, computing has rose to a different level, processors the size of skyscrapers, etc. Buildings are often an intricate network of computer systems. As such, espionage is still muchly needed in warfare. More often than not, droids have not been able to employ rational decisions during such missions. Hence, the need for human espionage agents to infiltrate the enemy depth to gather information. Past agents have failed and so ..you, Ashley, has been activated.

How does Ashley works? i mentioned before she wouldnt be wielding guns and swords, what she has with her is some sort of transmitter on her right forearm that transmit data via wireless mean to her foe (everything that moves in the battlefield basically has a prog running it) everytime data is received, ash programs executable viruses that is stored in her mainframe(whatever!)

But the cool thing is, not every foe can be inflicted with any virus. nooooo.. what ash needs to do is to gather info and knowledge, with this info she would then cater different kinda progs or viruses to inflict on her robotic foes... So instead of having weapons, you collect pieces of data to formulate diff viruses/progz to use against the enemy.

Ok, nuff said. there's a sharp twist at the end when she realises that the enemy has other things on their agenda like total world annhilation(yes yes...cliche) and that the agency ashley belongs to has a part in this whole deal. What will she do?

Hope that was enough background for my character.

Here's an update :wip:

[chucy©]

nice:buttrock:

[jocko]

:thumbsup:

[Dave Black]

Look'n killer, dom!

Nice sketches and a usefull character sheet to boot!

We may be competing directly pretty soon...Well...at least my character may be coming on to your character..hehe..

Good luck!

-3DZ

:D

[dominicqwek]

chucy- tks. helluva long way to go :banghead:

jocko- :thumbsup:

3DZealot- I thot your nick was familiar, and then i realised you were the self-volunteered max helpdesk over at our very own 3dsmax thread. LOL. Always good to have u ard. :thumbsup:

Hey man, cant wait to see what you have in stored. :drool:


Here's another update folks. I swear thats not the end of her face. Basically just getting my loops in. Do crit on the geometry. Cheers.

[jocko]

I'd like to see the sub-division rendered from another angle before I commit the following crit to stone:

The breasts seem to point out and up a bit too much, and maybe increase their mass a bit more (that's a personal opinion ;) ).

You're flyin'....


My imitation of Ashley running -- :bounce::bounce:

[dominicqwek]

jocko- here u go. honestly i think they're quite huge already. but hey, could always do with more. HAHAAA.:D

[Joril]

That's one good looking wireframe :)
Fantastic start!

[Lordrych]

boy dom you do one thread with a women in it and now look at you, your the master.....................LOL:scream: dude looking awesome boy i should just quite now there is no way i can beat you :argh:

Rych

[jocko]

Now that I see it from different angles, I definately think it needs a bigger chest (Or scale down the waist section a little)... You've got these awesome curves, and the chest doesn't seem to hold up its end of the deal. From the front, they cause the hip-waist-chest "curve ratio" to be imbalanced, and from the side, they don't balance out the butt-chest ratio to well.

As for pointing up and out too much... That was just my imagination.

DISCLAIMER: It is your model, so make it look how you feel it should look. This is just my opinion.

[jocko]

Or maybe I'm just jealous... The model looks awesome, and I'm not totally sure I could pull one off quite like that.

:beer:

[dominicqwek]

jocko-tks m8. point taken on the curves ratio thingy. I've pulled the chest out a bit and slimmed the back of legs and butts a bit as well. Tks for the crit! :thumbsup:

I forgot to tell you guys that she's asian. Anyway, this is how she'll look for now. Im moving on to other areas. If there's time i'll like to touch up her face though. :)

[dominicqwek]

heya rych, i aint no master dude,.. and of all ppl u should know that the best :D hope your wip is going good.:thumbsup:

[jocko]

She looks good man. :drool:

:buttrock:

[dominicqwek]

Ok. Her butt looks wierd now. :banghead:

[Lordrych]

Hey dom try and pull out the vertexes closest to her crack looks like they are too far in. See what that does, thank M8 i only hope we both can get first ;) .

Rych

[goodlag]

wow Nice sketches and good modeling:thumbsup:

[Totyo]

Mmmmhhh :buttrock: Very nice sketches ! About the modeling, isn't the head a little bit too small ?
But it rocks, as you said to me on my thread, you're doing great ! :p

[Aearon]

great modeling!

i agree, the head looks a little small
and i think the butt is just a little flat in some areas(on the sides), try to round it off a little

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:love: :love: :love:

Ok...i think i am....speechless???
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[akocan]

Hi DOM
.. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: two thumbp up! I'd say..
Great modelling so far.. She looks a bit creepy because she doesn't have hands and feet...
Nice breasts tough.. ;)

Sincerely

[dominicqwek]

Tks for the reply. gotta make this quick coz i gotta catch nemo, WOOHOO!

Lordrych- hmmm..ok will try it out. i thought they looked to far out man.tks though.

goodlag- tks for the comment. sketchin and concept took me 3 days :surprised

totyo-yeah the head is small. But have u seen the char designs for unreal? then female ghost warriors have small head(ok tht didnt really sound good) i wanted a more exaggerated look...u know..big thighs...but u might be right...i'll go see if a bigger head looks better.

fist-point taken. ok so the head's a lil small :wip:

dimitris- u? speechless???!! what about your bike??!!!:D

akocan- ermm yeah...anyone would look creepy without hands or legs( no pun intended) Tks for the comments.:thumbsup:

PS: Dont u just hate it when interviews dont turn up the way u want to be :surprised

[LordDubu]

Wow, Dom I don't know how you Box-modeler's do it. I take forever mostly because the only way I can model is poly-by-poly or manual spline caging...

I like the design and all i can say is "heh, she kicks high"

[snorthul]

Dang Dom, your modeling is sooo tight. She looks very feminine, but still able to kick ass. Wow, all that talent and you make her head too small? Oh, well, my girls head is too big, so I guess that we even everything out between the two of us right?

I am really looking forward to seeing how she ends up. I like the accessories you have on her. The robotics looks cool. I suck at robotics, so I'm probably going to wait a few days while I search for some of that stuff.

Good work.

[dominicqwek]

Lord Dubu- yeah she does kick high. with this boots hope, it hurts more when she does kick :D

snorthul- yeah i've made her head bigger by a bit. The robotics look is giving me a huge headache. Lotsa thinking time.

Anyway, here's an update of the rough shape of her boots. Details will be added in once a full basic model is out.

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:drool: :drool: :bounce: Does this compute?.....i like the details u give...

[leekhangwei]

ya dude keep on coming man..hope you can finish on time...great model on the boot and hope to see more details on the boot soon..

[dominicqwek]

dimitris - tks. there'll be more if there's time :)

khangwei-doing up the whole body first before adding details. tks for the comments. :thumbsup:

Added the forearm armour. gloves are not final. tell me if i can improve on anything. tks. :D



http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_06_comp.jpg

[Mentat7]

It occurs to me that those plug thingies on her knees would make excellent drainage devices for water on the knee... :D Very nice looking Bio-Babe!:thumbsup:

[dominicqwek]

Tks mentat.

Here's a small update ;)


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[Virtuoso]

Hi Dom....Sorry for the late support,but I am happy I caught your thread,it somehow slipped threw the cracks until now. Well I like the Sub-D start very much,all looks well.:thumbsup:

The story is solid enough,perhaps in the end the character her self can flesh it out more with what she does within the game itself.

Nice figure,I think as for size ratios etc,etc... you can pretty much do what you want,that's the beauty of Sci-Fi/fantasy game creations,for the most part lot's of freedom. I actually would like to see a little more exxageration here and there,leg length,or lack of length,streatching or more squat,extra large feet/boots.hands etc,etc... Well she is your beauty I'll leave all that to you........but what you do have is a very nice start,looks promising,and it's certantly one to watch here in this Challenge.Have fun,and keep going with the very good work.:thumbsup: :beer:

[dominicqwek]

tks for the crit m8 :thumbsup:

point taken. once the basic look of the model is out, i'll see how i can add that exaggerated look in. Like you said, maybe heavier boots or something like that. But i'll like to stay on path first and try to keep as close as possible to my sketch. ;)

I did spend some time on the story, and there's so much i wanna tell. There's a sharp twist at the end that really excited me. But i realised that this will have to come as a model first. The magnitude of the story would be too much for me to achieve.

:shrug:

[Dave Black]

Look'n great so far, man.

My only crits, would be that she kinda seems off-balance, or is lacking proportional rhythm...I have no idea how to say that better. I'd try bending a few joints a bit, and maybe getting a feel for her center of mass. Of course, this is really just my opinion. Please take it with a grain of salt.

Modeling looks real clean other than that.

Keep at it, man. You're doing great!

-3DZ

:D

[dominicqwek]

Tks m8. i'll look into her physique again. she does look like she's leaning a bit forward. Hey man, just shoot whatever crits u have, how else then can i improve on this model? :D

[zenzmurfy]

She looks great! About the head being small, usually thats so you can have space for lots of fluffy hair. In unreal tournament, a big head is a big target(I'm working on some toon characters for fun and made the realization). Small heads make the character look taller, body seem bigger/stronger, but it becomes unrealistic past a point, while in real life lots of people and kids have huge heads.

Btw: what program are you using for this?


Originally posted by dom
Tks m8. i'll look into her physique again. she does look like she's leaning a bit forward. Hey man, just shoot whatever crits u have, how else then can i improve on this model? :D

[dominicqwek]

zenzmurfy- Tks. Her head will be small.. not much fluffy hair since she's gonna have a ponytail. im using max.:thumbsup:

Havent had time to correct the off balance problem. Did a bit of her head gear.

Anyway, she doesnt seem to seem so off balance now.. my previous renders were done in orthographic view. For this render here, i had a cam set up. Tell me if she still looks off balance guys. Tks. :beer:

http://www.cgchallenge.com/entries/2209/34_large.jpg

[Neox]

nice work :)
but some points i would change

why do the biceps and triceps stop 10 cm before the elbow? or is the ellbow not under that glovethingie (sorry my english :D)

another thing is that, her arms seem to be a little to short, in a "normal" case you can reach the middle of your thigh with your fingertips...

and could you please show us a picture from the side, maybe then its easier to help you with that balancing problem :)

and to give her a much more sexy shape give her higheror a little smaller boots :)

but i wish you good luck for that challenge you're doing a fine job!

[iC4]

I would add some folds in front of the socks, at the moment it's hard to say that she wears socks

and I would also say that the boots are maybe a bit too large

other then that I think that you are doing a really good job - keep it up :thumbsup:

[Lordrych]

Dom looking freaking sweet, you might want to touch up the boobs they look a little like balls on her chest still awesome, Love the boots they are looking fantastic.

Rych

[Virtuoso]

Nice up-date DOM.:thumbsup:

I think she looks balanced,nothing to be concerned with. Anyways once you rig her and get her flexible that will be very a far away concern.

She is looking very nice,it's WIP,so for now I say you are doing a very good job.:applause:

I think what Neox mentioned about the biceps and triceps was that they appear a bit short,that perhaps you can elongate a bit more towards the elbows.It's quite minor, but would be a good idea to fix.

For now very nice,keep it up.:thumbsup: :beer:

[dominicqwek]

neox- hmm. about the biceps/triceps thing, i'll go fiddle ard and see if it looks better. somehow they look pretty alright to me. :p forearms are short probably becos her thighs are long. i wanted long legs in my design, not really to human realistic proportions but more of an exaggeration. As for the boots, they're far from what i had in mind, still working on them. they're supposed to look like sport shoes, the kinda slip em on look. :shrug: Tks for the crit.

IC4 - the socks would extend to inside the shoes, since i havent really refined the shoes, all u can see is the top of the shoes cutting her socks. but even then, i think wrinkles would be nice there...hmmm. Tks for the comments!

rych-yeah her boobs huh? roger that.

virtuoso-yeah i'll be looking into the arms issue. maybe they look a bit short becos the elbow gear ends higher into the upper arm. hmmm. ok . thanks for the crits! :thumbsup: AND you should be in this challenge you know, just enter, i cant wait to see what you have in stored. Cheers! :beer:

[akocan]

yo! DOM! that cyborgish look, it kills me.. I love it..

Go on, show more ;)

:bounce: :bounce:

[leekhangwei]

Hai Dom, about the boot, dont you think it is too heavy for her to move, like when kicking or running and hard for her to catwalk too.:)

[Kozlov]

Hi there Dom,
going great and i realy like the char. a few comments though- i would work over the hands especially the thumb needs some more attention ( but maybe its becouse the camera angle ) the upper arm muscles just lik Neox said...
I know its a WIP so sorry for beeing so pedantic.
Good luck im looking forward for some more and more
Kamil:thumbsup: :beer:

[Pancreas]

Great character, nothing as a naked chick to keep my atention on a screen! Anathomycally (wow did I said that?) looks right, it´s obviously a non 100% realistic type, as you´ve said tights are too long. But there are little issues that bug me:
the butt (yes, I start with the important parts) seems squared, too tall, make those cheeks rounder.
the tits (where inner beauty is) as Lordrych pointed out look too "sphere", place the nipples on them, it helps to get the shape. With those size they should hang more, be more saggy, me thinks.
I think the boots are too big too, and they don´t allow the ankle to rotate/bend. She would walk as a duck, a sexy duck.

Keep up the good work! :beer:

[Zixe]

Very nice model so far. Reminds me of StarCraft: Ghost. Game in the making from Blizzard.

http://www.blizzard.com/ghost/

http://www.blizzard.com/ghost/artwork/art23.shtml

[antnik]

Hey Dom...I love her....i marry her!! :bounce: :bounce: You got taste....:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:bounce: i don't think u need me to say that she is getting to be a very sweet model:drool: .....i think that u should listen to Pancreas for rounder butt (yes, I start with the important parts...too ):drool: ...and a little smaller boots...Neox maybe right for biceps and triceps..but this is up to your taste so do what u like to give to your character your personal feeling...damn she is hot ..i like girls with long leges(and round butt...who doesn't):wavey:

[dominicqwek]

i've ammended accordingly based on the comments you guys gave. pls forgive her boots, their still in the works. Will reply to y'all soon, gotta rush off! ;)

http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_09_comp.jpg

[LordDubu]

Dom, only crit I have at this point is her butt-cleavage seems a little too high...

Otherwise good job so far.

[Dave Black]

"butt-cleavage"? :surprised:

I agree. Bring the...er..."butt-cleavage" down a bit. Also, you may want to pull the verts on the inside of her...um..."butt-cleavage" closer together. I think the cheeks look a bit far apart.

Look stellar otherwise!

-3DZ

:D

[Wilson-3d]

Wow! It is going great. I love the model. Nice figure and the boots are looking good-I love the wrinkles in them.

[dominicqwek]

akocan- tks. i like techie stuff as well.

khangwei - made the boots smaller. ;)

jelwa - i've sorta fixed the thumb..but the hand is far from being done. Tks for the crits. fixed the triceps as well ;)

Pancreas- as u said, i've made the butt rounder and added her nipples in. Made ehr boobs sag a lil as well. :thumbsup:

Zixe- damn! how could you!! haha. Well, i dont deny that blizzard's artwork is a source of inspiration for me

antnik- u marry her? urrmm..she aint real dude. LOL. she's ...u know..a 3d model.... HAHA. Tks for the comments dude.

dimi-yeah the butt's rounder now i hope. dont wanna overdo it as well.

Lord dubu- roger that. butt cleavage has been lowered a lil bit.

3DZ- ermm..yeah i pulled them verts closer together...hope there;s more of a "butt cleavage" now..:D

wilson3d-tks for the comments.


Here's an update. working on her right forearm thingie before i move to the head gear. :drool: ..ohh..and the tex are really temporary, she's gonna be fully suited. though thongs wouldnt be a bad idea.:p

http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_10_comp.jpg

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:bounce: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :bounce:

And ....:drool: :drool: what a butt!!!!!

[Franky]

I like her,but I wish you could give her something more,to make her stand out even more than all the other warrior cyber chicks.Still looks nice,very good work.:thumbsup:

[leekhangwei]

ooou man.....this is getting better and better...or maybe u could add small hair for her...spikey hair would be nice...

[dominicqwek]

Tks for the kind comments folks.

dimi-i thought you'd like the butt. LOL.

Franky- I understand what you're trying to say and thats exactly what im trying to do. Hope i can get some kinda breakthrough to make her stand out more.:surprised

khangwei - tks dude. hmmm..spiky hair.. my initial design was for her to have a ponytail but nonetheless, i'll wait till the model is close to completion before doing a re-analysis of her entire look. I'll probably decide on her hair then.;)

[Joebount]

Great work so far ! keep the updates comming ! :)

[Hellwolve]

And just when I thought it couldn't get any better...:thumbsup:

And I'd like to vote for the spiky hair as well; at least that would be something to offset her from all cybergirls.

[stenarts]

boah...she is on really cool way....great stuff...show us more...

and yes, great butt really nice....;-)

STEN ;-)

[dominicqwek]

joebount - tks.will update soon.

hellwolve- vote taken into consideration. spiky hair...hmmm. ok, i'll think abt it. Tks ffor the comments,

stenarts- glad u like butt. :D

[Hellwolve]

Originally posted by dom
hellwolve- vote taken into consideration. spiky hair...hmmm. ok, i'll think abt it. Tks ffor the comments,

No problem :)

[BladeFX]

Nice modeling :beer:
only the hands seem a bit square compared to the realy nice curves on the rest of the body :drool:

waiting for updates :bounce:

[Neox]

nice! really nice!
and i think i found a solution for that "blance-problem" let her look forward not downwards :D

[dominicqwek]

hellwolve-:D

BladeFX-hands yet to be worked on. will try to make them more lady like. ;)

Neox-Damn!!! You're right! Hmmm, i'll go see to this. :)

[Dreamwave]

Looks like the chick from Star Craft: Ghost idd.
great modeling, nice concept, and what a hot ass! :beer:

[LordDubu]

Originally posted by Dreamwave
..., and what a hot ass! :beer:


I dunno... I still think the "crack" looks like it begins too high... But it might just be an optical illusion created by her outfit.

[dominicqwek]

Dreamwave-tks for the comments.:D

Lord Dubu- it might be.:shrug: i'll go check it out. ;)

Well folks, progress is slow as hell. Here's an update. Work on her head gear and hands... hmmm..ok forget the hands..i realised they look terrible. LOL. :banghead:



http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_11.jpg

[InnerVortex]

live it.. love the metal parts.. and the organic ones.. very sweet model!

[Lordrych]

Hey dom the hands aren't really that bad, actually they just look a little too fat, try to trim it down a bit, also they look a little square.

Rych

[LEEBLEEB]

To me the only thing wrong with the hands is that the fingers look a bit fat for a female hand.

[Virtuoso]

Hi Dom: I think she is very shapely,in fact very smooth &curvacious. I like the high tech gear mixed with the organic theme anyday of the week.

Your on to something very nice here.With your obvious skills as shown here I think the "Slight" Hand problem will be solved quickly.Just some toning down,sleeker look,the usual tweaking.keep her coming,she is one beautiful lady already,plus I love head gear.

Very nice work,bottomline....:beer:

[Colin de bink]

she is shaping up real nice dom
about the hands I would scale them down completly, I mean the whole hand make it smaller and the fingers a little thinner

then she would be awsome

[Wolfzbane]

Yow, really getting interesting. There's a dangerous balance to consider here... If you add too much she may become kinda "Borg-ish", not enough and she won't demark herself enough. The suggested spiky hair might be something good, depends how it is approached. I vote for a long-haired mohawk style falling to one side of the head... heh heh, just kidding. So far, apart from her extremely well shaped breasts, my eyes keep getting drawn to her wrist hardware and boots. I'm really curious as to what will be the final primary focus in this model. Planning on adding a lot more hardware?
All in all, fantastic job so far, will be watching this one closely...

[dominicqwek]

rych- tks m8. I'm done with them.

LEEBLEEB- yep, will posy an update soon. hope it looks better.

Virtuoso- tks for the kind comments. Im still figuring out her body suit, just thinking alone is giving me a hard time. :surprised

Colin de bink- well i did scale the fingers down individually and did some minor tweaking. :D

Wolfzbane-hey. i think that mohawk look might work. LOL. There shouldnt be anymore hardware really, i hope to do something different with her body suit. Still figuring out. Keep the comments coming. Tks.:D

[leekhangwei]

why not follow the amor design from ur 4th sketch...i think the design looks nice cos it suits ur character and of cos with a lot more plannings and refinement. Hope to see update soon:P

[Aearon]

i'd just keep the suit very tight and add creases in the right places to make it look realistic. if you do that you'll also need to smooth it out a little so it looks like it stretching over the body, for example a piece of cloth wouldn't follow the rib-cage so closely.

you don't need a lot of details and gadgets to make this one looks nice imo!

it's coming along great btw. :thumbsup:

[dominicqwek]

khangwei- functionality. More hard objects on her body, the more hard to rig. So im going for a body suit instead.:D

fist-yes yes. i intend to do that. it wouldnt be loose as cloth, but still it has to be tight..there should be seams across her boobs.

[Neox]

sweeeeet :D

but her hand :hmm: the thumb of a human hand is not flat on the side of the hand, let your hand relax and look how its "attched" to the rest of the hand :)

[CGSisdead]

Great work man :D

amazing model so far.

my 2 crits:

I think her mouth is positioned too low in her face.
And for your story: when there's espionage there's always stealth involved, so it would fit her better if her boots were a bit smaller and not so massive (for sneaking purposes). smaller boots would also more complement here lean and beautiful body ;)

for the rest: perfect work ....really great design :D (I especially like the idea with the knee-pads)

[dominicqwek]

Neox-tks for pointing tht out. :)

H13- i've shifte her mouth slightly upwards. As for the boots issue, its design over functionality. Just a personal preference. But tks for the crit. :D

Here's a minor update:

[dominicqwek]

Its 6:40am where i stay...gawd i need to sleep... here's what i've done so far. will head on to cleaning up the model and adding her hair. Today's my last day for modelling, gotta move on to textures. :wip:

http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_12_comp.jpg

[Neox]

this is getting better and better, but don't do too much details, rigging her will be horrible :D

[zzzrByte]

Looking great!:buttrock:

One crit/question... What are does wrinkles on the sides of her legs (over the knee and to the side of the hips)? It seems like that area is covered by skin and not cloth, so there shouldn't be any wrinkles.

[DimitrisLiatsos]

@zzzrByte . .. it looks wierd to me ...but i think that dom will texture the legs, those wonderfull legs:love: :love: , with leather pants or something....

Am i right? :bounce:

[zenzmurfy]

do you have a color scheme in mind for her?

[dominicqwek]

Neox=im done with details for now. Tks for the advise :beer:

zzzrByte- the legs will be suited. Those are the creases of her suit. :thumbsup:

Dimi- Boy you're smart alright. Thats the reason why i worship you :bowdown: LOL.

zenzmurfy- currently its dark grey for her legs, bluish black for her suit and knees. Its still not confirmed though... hope to do some colour testing. :D

[Katss]

This is a nice piece of work.Nice design and very good modeling.It will be nice to see this when finished even more so.:thumbsup: :)

[dominicqwek]

Katss-Tks m8. I hope to finish it on time as well. CHeers! :beer:

[Randuin]

lots of bio mechs in this challenge, great work keep it up

[LordDubu]

Dom, may I commend you on your expedient deftness in modeling, and your general goodness and non-suckitude. Respect is what I have for you in abundant droves of abundantnessitude. True the last isn't a word, but frankly the English language is inferior and inadequate and didn't provide me with the word I needed to properly convey my praise for your exiduberiference. Keep up the good work...

p.s. Her butt -still- bugs me.

[dominicqwek]

Randuin-tks m8.

Lord Dubu- LOL. :D Did u just come out with that??! If i dedicate her butt to you, would you like it more? :p

[dominicqwek]

:bounce:

Ok folks. I've done up some hair, honestly they look really unfinished, especially her ponytail. Do forgive the boots as well, gotta add more segments and correct some IDs.

What i do hope u guys could do was to give me some suggestions on the basic colour scheme and look for her.:D This includes her hair/skin colour as well. I was thinking whether i should have two types of metal for her gear..currently as u can see, i've assigned 2 shades of grey for her gear(forearm, boots and visor.), i think thats quite boring in an aesthetic point of view... so c'mon guys, just shoot. Tks in advance.:thumbsup:


http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_13_comp.jpg

[Hellwolve]

Here is some C&C for you:

-Make the boots higher (e.g. cover more of her lower leg)
-Add some red
-Add some green
-Add some more blue

Take note though, don't do all of those color scheme ideas ;)

[Virtuoso]

Looking good DOm.I could see her running down the beach with me,smooth and silky.very clean.nice modeling.My only suggestion,and it's a taste thing only..............Make her smile abit,it seems she is pouting at the moment.With her looks she should be happy all the time.

Very nice work,really well done.:thumbsup: :beer:

[leekhangwei]

hai....i think you should consider her characteristic before u put a suitable color scheme for her....like what is her current status in her world...sharper brighter for higher rank, or maybe her color scheme is determine by her own personalities...you could add feminine colors but yet shows the toughness, speed, and abilities to perform like nobody could.

[LordDubu]

Originally posted by khang wei
hai....i think you should consider her characteristic before u put a suitable color scheme for her....like what is her current status in her world...sharper brighter for higher rank, or maybe her color scheme is determine by her own personalities...you could add feminine colors but yet shows the toughness, speed, and abilities to perform like nobody could.

Or... when all else fails: Black and Red PVC

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:bounce: Hi dom...just a coloring ..very fast idea...:shrug:

[Joebount]

hum, leather ...hummmmmmmmmm :drool:

hum, sorry guys, I lost myself :p

[Dirk_P_Ho]

I like Dimitris' colour scheme a touch more than yours Dom, looks great though.

[Ionized]

Yeah, real nice work man. Love the spike on her arm and the nipples are a bonus!!:drool:

[dominicqwek]

Tks for the comments. Just when u think everything was going good, something bad has to happen. My com sorta died on me in a way(hardware problem), and i'll have to stop for half a week or so..ah well.

Hellwolve-no RGB?!:scream:

Virtuoso-just for u. I'll make her smile. LOL

khangwei- nice point. I'll take this time to do some thinking. :thumbsup:

Dubu- Black n red huh? Dont u think its a little bit striking? Hmmm,..will consider. ;)

Dimi-tks for the help. I'll take into consideration. :D

Dirk-yeah i think so too.

Ionized- ahh i see u have a fetish for nipples. :bounce:

[Hellwolve]

Originally posted by dom
Tks for the comments. Just when u think everything was going good, something bad has to happen. My com sorta died on me in a way(hardware problem), and i'll have to stop for half a week or so..ah well.

Hellwolve-no RGB?!:scream:

That's why I said not all of 'em :p

[Lordrych]

Dom FanF#$kingtastic Love it dude, and the color scheme all depends on the backround and what the game would be like, but the best part is you choose cause it is your character ;)


Rych

[dominicqwek]

Hellwolve-yeah i know. :scream:

Lordrych- u really think its fanf*ckingtastic huh? Tks a lot! I will take those things into consideration. Sadly, my com has broke down..i'll take this time to go doodle some more and come up with some basic designs for her suit. :thumbsup:

[Virtuoso]

Borrow,beg.or steal a PC,get that girl going again.;)

It's a real shame about your PC.technology is sooo great,but it can also be a nightmare at times. Sometimes a sketchpad is all the better.Hope to see you back in action soon.

Hey maybe now you can really think deep with the extra thought time and get something extra for her.A toy or something? Take care,hope to see you back in action soon.:beer:

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:bounce: Gimme your address .. i will sent u a Dual Athlon MP 1800 Ghz with 2 GByte ram and a quadro 2 pro...u have to finish this one man....i want to see it finished!!!:bounce: :bounce:

[LordDubu]

Uhhhhh his addres is: *gives own address*... yeah that's the ticket.

[dominicqwek]

Virtuoso- yeah technology IS great..but everything has its flaws. Sometimes we're just so dependent on it..all of a sudden i realised i couldnt work on her, i practically sat there and stoned.Like u said, i will take time to think things through. Tks.:D

Dimi-Its gonna cost u a lot.. air freight charges are gonna be crazy to send all those stuff to singapore. LOL. Btw, thats quite close to my config,got a trusty quadro4 ..woo hoo....*sobs*... I want my com back...:cry: (i WILL finish it. ;) )

Lord Dubu- get dimi to send it over and i'll give u the rest except 1 Gb of ram. Deal? Shipping charges on me. :scream:

[Erik]

Great job Dom, could you give me her phone number ??:love:

[dominicqwek]

Erik- ermm.. she's computer generated. dont think she has a phone number. lol. :beer:

[RandomTask]

Thats cool
I like the detail and how clean the model looks:thumbsup:

I agree with Hellwolve about the boots needing to be a bit higher though and from the back it looks a bit like shes getting the mother of all wedgies.:)

[dominicqwek]

Really appreciate the crits. I'll take note of that. wont have time to ammedn it though, there's been too much work for me to handle lately..and progress is hitting a hiatus for now.

Ermm..as for the wedgy....ermm..sorry..got a bit kinky i guess. LOL. i've got comments on that too..will give more volume to the "crack" above her butt. :D

[dominicqwek]

Hi folks, sorry for the long wait. my com is still down and i've got shitloads of work. Managed to squeeze this out, not much for now. Hope i have more time to work on her.:surprised

Not sure if im gonna make it for the deadline :hmm:



http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_14.jpg

[RobertoOrtiz]

Dude you are kicking my butt soo hard with your entry
that it is not funny.

Good job
My only crit is that the area around her nose is a bit to sqare.

Anyway good job!

-R

[Fetus23]

DOM!! Your challenge entry is coming along wonderfully...Just wanted to pop in and give some support. I hope you have time to get her rigged and posed for the deadline...A couple suggestions, I would like to see her with a smaller nose and perhapes some more dirty textures. Keep up the good work dom!!

:beer:
fetus

[dominicqwek]

Tks for the crit. the nose looking square might be a specularity prob. will look into it :beer:

fetus23- tks for the support! :buttrock: i'll go try a smaller nose.;) As for the dirty textures, it all depends on time now.

[Magnusv]

Overall a good piece of work.But the face is far to plastic,it needs more attention.The nose is a taste thing,I leave that up to you.The body and shape and modeling are nice,but the textures for the face need the most help or work,they throw off the rest as of now.Anyways a good entry.:thumbsup:

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:love: i definitely love her outfit!!!!...keep on !!!

As for the nose..ialso say it's a personal taste thing...everything else has already been said.....update now please !!! :wavey:

[Ionized]

This is coming along well Dom.

The hair is looking quite good as is the rest. Two things you might want to have a look at are the skin shader... it looks too plastic. Try adding some falloff maps and reducing the specular highlight. Also with the proportions of the face I get the feeling that the lower half of her face could be more pronounced. Maybe bring out the jawline more.

Otherwise, good work man, keep going!!

[leekhangwei]

hai Dom, you might wan to consider about her forehead, cos i think is too short and the hair grow is like grow in a straight line...;)

[dominicqwek]

Tks for all the crit. here's an update. :surprised

http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_15_lo.jpg

[Franky]

Nice figure,body armor,modeling too is well done.I am not as pleased with the face,the mouth looks bitter,not attractive,but it could just be the expression you want for her.The textures need more realism I think too,because she is human not a cartoon.
I still think it's a good model,I like her,the figure is very good,just needs a little more work,but thats why this is a work in progress right? Still good work.:thumbsup: :)

[Totyo]

Very nice progression Dom ! : ) One thing is still shocking me is the mooth of your character : too thin in coparaison of the face... and the body.
Sorry, I had to found something to criticize : )

[dominicqwek]

Hmmm..seems like a lot of ppl are having issues with the mouth... ok..i'll make them more pouty. Will push on. Time is scarce... :scream:

[DimitrisLiatsos]

I like the color scheme...now give us full body...front and..back....:drool:


dom ..u and the hand are killing me guys...:drool:

P.S : waiting for finals...

[antnik]

Hey dom.. I like her. I can see a very good design here and all the job too. :thumbsup: :beer:

[dominicqwek]

dimi- im just roadkill for your biker dude. :p

antnik-tks for the comments. hope to get more things done with whatever time left.

More poses if time permits. texture's ain' final yet. :)

http://www.dominicqwek.com/images/gicwip/gic_wip_16_lo.jpg

[Virtuoso]

Nice to see you got it done Dom.Nice pose,it really turned out quite well.Hope you can still give alittle more texture lovin to her,but if not for the deadline then the wip section would be a good place for her to get finalised.Anyways nice job.:thumbsup: :beer:

[dominicqwek]

Final UPdate. Phew.

http://www.dominicqwek.com/3d/ash_.jpg

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:drool: :thumbsup: :drool:

[antnik]

Great Dom. :thumbsup: :beer:

[dodo3d]

:applause: :applause: :applause:

I'd like to see it in an animation

[dominicqwek]

dimi/antnik- tks. it was a tough ride for me. :scream:

dodo3d- definately in time to come. Kinda burnt out for now, need to take a break. ;)

I still intend to work on her textures and lighting as well, and hopefully post a better image soon. Tks for the comments and help all this time guys. :buttrock:

[hanzo]

man this is good stuff you got here, like the modeling, char has good shape :D

[Ionized]

This has turned out really good Dom. The facial expressions and action poses really sell the character. I still love those nodes on her arms, they suit her.

Only crit would be the hair texture looks a bit crunchy compared to the rest of the model. Other than that, it looks great!:applause:

[Dirk_P_Ho]

Very nice work there dom, turned out just like the concept, good stuff.

[dominicqwek]

hanzo- tks m8. i took the effort to design my character in more detail this time round, instead of heading straight into modellin. :)

Ionized- glad u like the nodes, they arent rigged to my liking yet, still gotta weigh those verts all over. :surprised As for the hair, yeah they dont look that good. will switch to shag hair for the pony tail part. Tks. Love your submission. :buttrock:

Dirk- tks man. To me, concept will always come first.

[antnik]

Hey Dom.. I am gona have a holliday..so i wish to you to have some good hollidays and i ll see you around.. Byee

[d4rk]

some other brothahs might deny....


nice work!

[Jb5k1]

:drool: :drool: i like red heads :drool: :drool:

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