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KingJeff
09-03-2008, 01:04 PM
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Title: The door
Name: Jean-François Gauthier
Country: Canada
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

Hi,
this is an environment I made using a black and white concept art found on the net by Coran Bunkvic. It is render with scanline and comments would be greatly appreciated. Enjoy!
Artemstudios
09-03-2008, 09:11 PM
Looking cool. I think those statues on the sides could use some more modelling love. I don't know what the concept looked like but I think the brick walls and the stairs could use some details to seperate the tiling texture. I'm not sure if it's the angle of the render but on the right the bricks seem to bend upwards, not sure if that is a uv error or the render. Looks nice otherwise though.
azynkron
09-04-2008, 12:57 AM
Yes, I second that. It looks like the stone texture has some waves.
Also, I don't know if it's a design detail, but the lions tilts towards the camera..?

Perhaps you should try to raise the perspective a bit so that you have the camera
in eye height of the imaginary viewer? I mean, around 1,70 m or so in your scene scale.
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