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Gbball
09-03-2008, 06:07 AM
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Title: Oops!
Name: Gavin Ball
Country: Canada
Software: Photoshop

Hi,

This is the first time I've submitted an image to CG Society. This piece started as my submission for a drawing jam at work a while ago, but I kept on working at it here and there. The topic was 'oops'. The story behind it is that a security guard on his very last shift before retirement runs into a bank robber from hell. The four bullets he fired off only seem to make the thief angry...


Comments and Crits most welcome!

-Gavin
gega
09-03-2008, 10:07 AM
Hello Gbbal!
I like so muche your work, very funny and clean, color palette is beautifull!
5stars for me
kay2
09-03-2008, 11:08 AM
realy nice style! Great!
Gbball
09-03-2008, 05:08 PM
Thanks a lot, I appreciate it!
leocda
09-03-2008, 05:24 PM
Very funny.

Congrats.
FRENZIEDmind
09-04-2008, 06:58 AM
Nice work, great style!

crit:
the position of the hands on the robber appear odd and unnatural (as if there's a natural with cartoons).
Gbball
09-07-2008, 02:18 AM
Thanks for the crit...tried to stylize it a bit, not sure if it came across.

peace
MarioVeltri
09-09-2008, 12:30 PM
I love the proportion of the "Super-Evil". Very interesting
is also his expression. Only crit is the background, that has not
the same "mood" of the characters. I had used a much more
colorfull one and with more details (and/or) strange crap objects on
the floor, the wall ecc..
Gbball
09-12-2008, 03:16 AM
Cool,

thanks man, I always appreciate crits, it helps me to improve.

-Gavin
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