Still: Aquarium

[Animator395]

Great image! Im wanting to see some more clues that there is water there though.

Awesome job! Keep it up

[Animator395]

Just noticed something else. The second fish in the backgroun except for the color looks just like the one in the foreground. A suggestion is changing position and expression. I would get a better feeling that there are two fish in the bowl.

[Rivendale]

Hey, maybe you could sell this concept to Pixar, they havn't made any fish-related stories lately. You could have them swimming around looking for some lost fish or something.:rolleyes:

Nice image though, but like Animator395 said, you need to make it fell like they are in water more. Adding some caustics and particles would be good.

[Volcandro]

Thank you guys :)
I'm going to add some bubbles and different expressions to to fishes.

[Kel Solaar]

Maybe it's too blured, and Yes add some bubbles :)

other wise I love the colors! :bounce:

[Remi]

Add some muck too...just some particles floating around in there.....looks good though...oh and add some different looking fish(as in shape and size)...that would help the image immensly(Spelling?):thumbsup:

[UnlikelyCorny]

The thing about fish is.....well basicly they swim (nasty habbit).
And they do that with...... fins (hey don't blame me, I did not invent those watery creatures).

Jokes aside, It does look weird without fins. And I agree with the blur, bubbles and Finding Nemo remarks.

[Volcandro]

Another Composition with some color corrections.fishes3 (http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/wip/fishes50000.jpg) http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/wip/fishes50000.jpg

[UnlikelyCorny]

The've just met a gigantic shark now, right?
And they think, "How did this M*********r get into our aquarium, cause they look scared....(and with such teath why would you be).

It looks much better like this, the different fish is good as well.

[Volcandro]

It is something else that can i add ???

[Signal2Noise]

Blood. Add some blood. With teeth like that they need to be ripping into something!

Nice job.

Note: If you're going to keep adding stuff then this should be considered a WIP, not a finished piece.

[Volcandro]

thank you signal to noise
blood could be coooooool but they are afraid so i don't know if it's a good idea

[UnlikelyCorny]

Originally posted by Signal to Noise


Note: If you're going to keep adding stuff then this should be considered a WIP, not a finished piece.

Signal has got a point there.... You're not finished till you're finished (and that is how the great wall of China was build).

[DZL]

here's a link some helpful underwater hints:

http://movies.yahoo.com/movies/feature/findingnemo.html

great info on how to make a realistic underwater environment from the masters at pixar.

ho'kay - peaz out.

[Volcandro]

wow !!!
thank you for the link :eek:

[Volcandro]

Ok guys this is the last post here and it's the final one ;) fishesfinal (http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/wip/fishesfinal.jpg) http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/wip/fishesfinal.jpg

[kr3ml]

waooow , I like it the fishes got personality in their faces :thumbsup:

[Volcandro]

Hmmm
Maybe I gonna send it to Pixar for Nemo 2 hehehe ???
What do you think guys ? No chances ... :shame:

[Animator395]

Really comming along! keep it up.

[Volcandro]

I'm searching for a job. Maybe you have suggestions of cool places in Canada who searching for modelers or animators ?

Thank You

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