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fujii
08-31-2008, 03:40 PM
Hi

These are my two short films.
hope you enjoy.

Mechanization
http://yu-fujii.web.infoseek.co.jp/mecanization.html

http://yu-fujii.web.infoseek.co.jp/image/02/MechanizationA3.jpg

http://yu-fujii.web.infoseek.co.jp/image/02/MechanizationB3.jpg
and


Machine
http://yu-fujii.web.infoseek.co.jp/machine.html

http://yu-fujii.web.infoseek.co.jp/image/02/Machine_03226_02.jpg
My Homepage
http://yu-fujii.web.infoseek.co.jp/



Comments are most welcome!

thanks
BocaJuniors
09-07-2008, 05:22 PM
Yeah, I liked it.
JTR-special
09-08-2008, 03:05 PM
Hi Fuji! enjoyed your two films, very cool stuff! but was a little distracted by the effects that were going on in both of them, the blue fire in "mechanization", and the light streaks in "machine." I think they kind of detracted from what is actually going on in the film. my two cents. Great job though!
FattyGrissle
09-08-2008, 04:40 PM
Cool concept and idea.
Agreed about the light things.
My only crit, I think there needs to be some foot roll in the run cycle. And the hands also could close once in a while instead of being in a static position the whole time. Add more realism to it.
But other than that I really liked it.
fujii
09-11-2008, 04:46 PM
thanks comments!

BocaJuniors,jtruthnick,FattyGrissle,

Ah...I Agreed about the light.

thank you good advice.

Comments are most welcome!

thanks
Angroc
09-11-2008, 09:04 PM
Mushi mushi! Really liked it. Good rendering all around. My biggest problem with it though, was the animation.
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