Threesome, Martin Lubich (3D)

[Vlada3d]

The scene looks fine but here some advices and sugestions to you.

- You could work a little bit on the shader of the snake
- The volume that is coming from the sun throught the tree leafs is bit to strong and it looks more like laser than particles of dust hit by sun. It should be little noisy

[Bubbaloo]

Cool scene! Poor little rodent. Maybe the owl and snake will kill each other and he will get away...

I think the animals are very good. Maybe a bit more motion blur on the owl and snake. And also the snake in a more dynamic pose like he is striking.

[rohanoka]

scene looks nice n well executed :D
something that could add to it woulds be a lil more variation in the background lighting to add more depth .

[DarkLimit]

-Lovely scene I like the details in the background and the bird is great.....based on the ray of light the snake should not be lite so consistently there would be some dark areas/shadows..Maybe that's a matter of taste but nevertheless great job....

[mandana]

really nice.I like it Martin
the mouse it so cute ^.^
good luck dear friend:beer:

[souledge3]

oh super job

[loramel]

Thank you all for the helpful and kind comments.

This piece was (again) a huge learning experience. And that's what counts for me.

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