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sszyszka
08-22-2008, 05:12 PM
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Title: Dove Bottles
Name: Sebastian Szyszka
Country: USA
Software: Modo, Photoshop

Just another product practice project. Modeled and rendered in modo 302 with minor contrast adjustment on the BG in Photoshop.

noviolence
08-23-2008, 04:36 AM
I think the Roughness on the plasticbottles is a little to high.

But except that it looks nice to me :)
keep modonizing

Crayox
08-23-2008, 06:41 AM
Yes, this is cool! Nice lighting, but I would also prefer more smooth render, less noise. Those commercials usually have perfect smooth posters.

Bubbaloo
08-24-2008, 12:51 AM
I think it is not "professional quality" yet, but you are heading in the right direction.

The soap needs some SSS.

escribanto
08-24-2008, 05:41 AM
I look the roughness in the bottle right!

Because the bottle will be wet, the texture over the body of the bottle prevents the slip. :rolleyes:

sszyszka
08-24-2008, 06:50 PM
Thanks everyone.

The noise is indeed a bit much. The surface has a roughness applied to it and my mistake was not tweaking it for the low-res render, whereas it is perfect at print res.

The soap has SSS on it, though the effect was diminished when I converted down to sRGB color space.

Both are lessons learned...

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