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profesone
08-17-2008, 04:10 AM
I am trying to get into the CG world! I have done comics for a while and just love the digital painted style. Please give me your best shot om work. I'll start with this one.

http://www.drawingboard.org/download.php?id=70487

Mark Henry
www.500lines.com (http://www.500lines.com)

CybrGfx
08-17-2008, 12:34 PM
Hi Mark, welcome!

A question. What, exactly, is it that you "love" about the digital painted style?

The piece you've uploaded is quite nice, but the anatomy is off. The neck is too skinny, the mouth is positioned too far to the left, and the philtum is too exaggerated and misplaced.
~C

RebeccaSx
08-17-2008, 05:53 PM
Welcome to the forums :-) Nice pic, I like your comic art style!! I'd suggest uploading a few pics so people can get a feel for your style, then when your working on something it's easier to get constructive critiques and help. Keep it up!

profesone
08-17-2008, 09:49 PM
See! That is what I mean. I don't seem to notice things like that. But now that you pointed it out, the neck is crazy small compared to everything else. I think the mouth is fine she's looking to our right and the mouth should not be centered, should it?

Second comment:
Do you mean post more images on this post?

Here's one I did last night.

http://www.500lines.com/picts/hulk02.jpg

Mark Henry
www.500lines.com (http://www.500lines.com)

profesone
08-25-2008, 01:46 PM
I added more constrast to the character.
http://www.500lines.com/picts/hulk03.jpg

profesone
08-25-2008, 02:01 PM
Somebody asked for more work. Here's a sh!+ load of my personal sketches and doodles.

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/1383/sts0109nd.jpg
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/9245/sts0082ep.jpg
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/1466/sts0074qy.jpg

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/347/sts0052gc.jpg
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/3695/sts0044gi.jpg
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/4237/sts0033wu.jpg

http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/2946/sts0019li.jpg


http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/1046/st041rf.jpg
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8273/st012vl.jpg
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/4943/extra5wv.jpg

Mark Henry
of the mighty
www.500lines.com (http://www.500lines.com)

profesone
08-26-2008, 03:02 AM
ok. Maybe my work suck that much. Does anyone have and pointers for me?

DANKA
08-27-2008, 09:05 PM
Nice sketches, you have a nice hand on the paper, nice details...I prefere your traditional drawings then the digit colored ones...but good work, keep it up!

profesone
06-22-2009, 05:46 PM
http://500lines.com/picts/concept06.jpg

http://500lines.com/picts/concepts10.jpg

http://500lines.com/picts/concepts02.jpg

http://500lines.com/picts/concepts03.jpg

http://500lines.com/picts/concepts07.jpg

http://500lines.com/picts/cocnepts04.jpg

http://500lines.com/picts/concepts08.jpg

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