It is me!

[forget-me-not]

i need you addvise ,thanks

[epatnor]

Funny little characters... what are they doing on the table and why are they so small, I might wonder? :shrug:

To be perfectly honest: I think you need to work on some slightly more compicated scenes if you want some constructive critique! :wip:

Good luck with your next pic! ;)

[diazgl]

I agree, they look pretty nice, but I reccomend fixing the scene a bit.
-go easy with the reflections, a phone isn't a mirror; Also, lessen the reflections of the table.
-do some better texturing
-Make your chars more plastic
-add a bit more interesting lighting, as in a bed lamp maybe to light the scene?

Oh, and render at a bit higher resolutions (my default one, and a good one to ask judgement upon is 640x480)

Good luck!!

[forget-me-not]

Thank you both very much for your advice. This picture is from my earlier works and is a cartoon picture of myself. I was so eager to see the result shown, that's why much details were ignored.

I'm now working on a scene, to which I'm much more patiently dealing with every detail. Hope then I'll get other suggestions from you guys.

Going forward together!

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