Movie Heroes in the wind

[TryForce]

well its not really animation. i would more welcome it it 2d or 3d sections.

As first was that the story is kinda hard to understand. Thanks to the pictures i was able to figure out atleast abit. But all that timeskip made things more wierd and wierder. As first i thought its going to be a Love-Story because of "Patty". But i didnt get any sense out of this comic. You should concentrate on one thing in a story. To make it more understandable.

It shows off that you wanted to finish a whole story of 100 comic compressed into 1 comic. Thats a definantly No-Go. the more you do = the more you get. Amen :bowdown:

keep it up!

[Rosso12]

Is because of this that I seek people to cooperate and follow recommendations.
The story is a love unpaid between the events of a historical fact really happened ... OPERATION JUDGMENT ( is very important attack and is the blueprint for PEARL HARBOUR)


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_Taranto


Best Regards Angelo



well its not really animation. i would more welcome it it 2d or 3d sections.

As first was that the story is kinda hard to understand. Thanks to the pictures i was able to figure out atleast abit. But all that timeskip made things more wierd and wierder. As first i thought its going to be a Love-Story because of "Patty". But i didnt get any sense out of this comic. You should concentrate on one thing in a story. To make it more understandable.

It shows off that you wanted to finish a whole story of 100 comic compressed into 1 comic. Thats a definantly No-Go. the more you do = the more you get. Amen :bowdown:

keep it up!

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