View Full Version : Car 011, lio sarmiento (3D)
sarmiento 08-07-2008, 05:49 PM http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/186342/186342_1218131381_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/186342/186342_1218131381_large.jpg)
Title: Car 011
Name: lio sarmiento
Country: Venezuela
Software: 3ds max, mental ray, Photoshop
hi guys, this image is a test render in mentalray, i hope some comments for upgrade my work.
Sorry my english...
C&C are welcome.
bye guys
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Elfenlyte
08-08-2008, 12:25 AM
Very nice, I like how the color tons of the automobile fits the environment.
Now, is that environment composited or actually 3D? Very realistic; everything. But could you post a render with lights turned off? The do look a tiny bit unreal
Adz86
08-08-2008, 10:42 AM
Very nice, All it needs is the tag line and it would look like its part of an advert
Seijiro
08-08-2008, 12:10 PM
The car looks great and it fits well with the background. But the lights need a bit tweaking, there's some weird stuff going on at the far end of the ceiling, where one light "pipe" is covered in light but I don't see where that light is coming from. (There might be a door there which I missed, but it's hard to tell from this angle :P)
Also, it might just be me but that lens flare really distracts me and takes away from the picture. If you really want one, you could try a smaller one. But still that's just me.
But as far as the car goes, it's really nice modeling and shading. Great work.
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