I'm a month late.......but i'm FINISHED!!

[Pooyag]

pretty good, i like it!
there is one thing though.....MAX, the rig, his mouth is never closed which is kinda weird for me.
Keep it up!;)

[Nacho Nachev]

nice animation :) I want to ask you ? how you put texture(or color) on "max for maya" rig ?

[wbeeler]

HAHA! Great stuff. Nice job.

"Welcome to New York. Why, thank you."

:)

[gagn]

Nicely done!

Only one critique: His eyes go white when he looks back at her... Try to keep his pupils in view all the time, even though he won´t actually be looking at her, it will look more appealing.

It´s a really funny dialogue :)

[sgbox]

good acting man.

[sapienz]

Since you had the intention of gettin him suprised, might just wanna get him to look in another direction in the begining.
You probably spent quite abit of time with the princess but the passerby seems abit neglected in comparasion.
Some possible stuff that you might wanna try
Hasten his walking speed after the Suprise.
For the guy's 2nd blink, try not to animate the eye's orientation while the lid is closed.
Rest his mouth( don't keep them open throughout the clip )
As he leaves the screen, continue to look at the girl thru the sides of the eye.

and yeah get rid of the white eye at the end

[jonnyanim8]

Cheers for the comments guys!
I would definitely agree that the guy could do with another pass. You know what its like, its hard to see things that are wrong with it when its just you looking at it over an over again! Which is why i posted it here. Will probably go back to it when i put my new reel together.

Nacho-
i just selected the polys on the mesh and assigned a different material. I'm kind of lo-tech when it comes to texturing etc.

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