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station75
05-30-2003, 10:22 AM
hello all

i've made second enviroment for my robot's fight so please write some C&C (what You like or dislike):

http://station75.com/teampoland/factory_01.jpg
http://station75.com/teampoland/factory_02.jpg
http://station75.com/teampoland/factory_03.jpg
alienesque
05-30-2003, 12:06 PM
hi..looks great..if theres one thing that could do with looking at its the sort of 'powdery' look to parts of the background..apart from that..fantastic:)
station75
05-30-2003, 12:13 PM
thx it's hard to light scene like that (for me of course :)

thx again for comments.
kiwi
05-30-2003, 12:20 PM
Nice work :thumbsup:


Ah line the walls with packing crates...its a warehouse right?,make some high shelves and put some boxes on them,if you have oil drums you are bound to get spills so make the floor a bit grimy to show that.Maybe try concrete on the floor instead of the metal grid then you have no bump worries :)



Stu.
station75
05-30-2003, 12:41 PM
Originally posted by kiwi

Ah line the walls with packing crates...its a warehouse right?,make some high shelves and put some boxes on them,if you have oil drums you are bound to get spills so make the floor a bit grimy to show that.Maybe try concrete on the floor instead of the metal grid then you have no bump worries :)

Stu.

Right concrete and oil's spills is a very good idea thx, but (sorry for my english) shelves mean sth like 'shelf'? with box on it?

and maybe some electric wires on top of building?

what Ya think?
derwolpertinger
05-30-2003, 12:50 PM
looks great apart from the lighting, just try to focus the light on the place where the robots are standing and are going to fight, and just darken the parts around, don't make it black just darken it and give it a dark slight blueish light, and the bright center should be more yellowish. maybe you can make the center light visible and add an alpha mask to it, so you can get a dusty look.
station75
05-30-2003, 12:54 PM
big thx :) i'll make some updates (to the lights and materials, objects) and post renders tommorow.

thx again.
JIII
05-30-2003, 04:35 PM
deffinitely try and tone down the back ground dude. it looks nice but its taking away from the main action.

but you have got a really nice pic there buddy.
flingster
05-30-2003, 04:46 PM
reminds me of small soldiers movie...head to head.

like it.

only comment is all the oil cans look the same...maybe dent some of them...bash them up a bit...maybe different coloured...+ scratches...worn label...grime etc etc.

also like someones idea about concrete floor...

just don't overcrowd it with to much stuff...they gotta have room to kick each other etc...:shrug:

:thumbsup:
station75
05-30-2003, 04:56 PM
maybe this be better:
http://station75.com/teampoland/factory_04.jpg
JIII
05-30-2003, 05:16 PM
hmm good progress just remember what dwolperinersfdsf said.

the human eye is attracted to the color red. and is not attracted to the color blue.

so if the back ground is more blueish than the foreground where the action is taking place, you will achieve a better effect.

but it is looking better.
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