Mt McKinley Inc. Headquarters, Simone Jennarelli (3D)

[LouisCho]

The pool concrete sides are very big if you compare tham to a bench. The space is wried because we have no comprehension of it: Why this buildng is in the middle of a Windows XP background? I suggest you to place your camera a eyes level (5'5 / 6' ) aand find a composition who keep the building as the main subject.

I am not sure about the concept. It's like a Charlie and the chocolate factory building. Point to consider a change:
1- big roung windows, there like submarine mannhole and they don't let the sun in.
2-The round uilding, the curve is too tight, not much light in. It's ok for a cereal bunker but not for a working/living space.
3-The only material you use is the metal sheet. It's ok sometimes but in this case, it's boring. thy to play with others materials.

You modeling and light is good and I am sure you can do better. Try with a existing building in a book or a magazine.

keep it up

[KeithManga]

Sorry LouisCho

but you comments, I'm sorry, are pure garbage!

I've studied also your Portfolio. I don't know where and how you work in Architecture Visualisation, but here your comments are a total mistake. I'm sorry but, by reading your comments, it seems that you don't even understand anything about Architecture.

Your comment is a total mistake.

Your works on your Portfolio are really of a lesser quality indeed and in general (bluish renderings etc).

From your Portfolio and your comments here I only understand that you don't understand anything about Architecture!

You Keep it up... kid, not LeonJenn who clearly knows his job very well here (Architecture and Architecture Visualisation), instead of you.

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Great Stuff LeonJenn

We really hope to see other stuff like this from you, LeonJenn. Don't worry, here there are a lot of incompetent people, who don't understand anything, in CGS who crit to make themselves important, like LouisCho.

Great Stuff LeonJenn

Kenji

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