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kassinopious
05-29-2003, 07:19 PM
hi

ive been working on this for a couple of days now.. im happy with the way its turning out but i would really appreciate comments and crits from you guys since you know what your doing with 3d programs n im still aqquiring my skills :)

in reverse order

newest render:
http://images.deviantart.com/large/designs/d3d/study2.jpg

initial render:
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/3d/a_study_room_-wip_render_1.jpg

Thanks very much in advance for comments

-KasS

kassinopious
05-29-2003, 10:22 PM
:S why do my renders always seem to go unnoticed? if there that bad can someone please tell me what to improve

i know i havent started applying materials yet... but that is why its in the wip forum

Petrik
05-30-2003, 02:35 AM
You have more skills then I have. Especially if this has only taken you a matter of days.

Krisc
05-30-2003, 02:39 AM
So do my renders, always go unoticed, all two of them, lol. Anyways, I like them, just make that chair a rolly chair, and maybe move some of the objects out of the corner, as you seem to be stuffing it in that corner, unless this is modeled after a real office, which in that case keep it there, or move the real office stuff. :bounce: :beer:

can I see some wire frames?

Gatling
05-30-2003, 03:06 AM
Very nice work, but it seems a bit too "orderly", and too grid-oriented. Try turning things at slight 5 degree angles, just to throw off the alignment (mainly in the chair, which is arguably the centerpiece)

:bounce:

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