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GregorTheRoach
07-28-2008, 06:25 AM
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Title: Coming Up
Name: Christopher Black
Country: USA
Software: Painter, Photoshop

So, this is the first finished piece of work I've created in a long time. I barely got my Wacom and Painter X two months ago. I've drawn most of my life and am trying to get back in to it. Hopefully there will be many more to come.

It's supposed to have a more comic-book like feel to it. I've been a reader since I was a little kid.

This took about twenty hours or so. I'm still learning the programs. This was done in Painter X with a tiny bit of finish work in Photoshop CS3.

Comments and Critiques are much appreciated. If there's any way you think that I could improve on future projects please give me your advice.

MikeTex
07-28-2008, 01:11 PM
Looks Great my only crit is where he is grabbing onto the car it looks more like a blanket or cloting than metal. But over all great job!

jaggudada
08-02-2008, 06:23 AM
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Title: Coming Up
Name: Christopher Black
Country: USA
Software: Painter, Photoshop

So, this is the first finished piece of work I've created in a long time. I barely got my Wacom and Painter X two months ago. I've drawn most of my life and am trying to get back in to it. Hopefully there will be many more to come.

It's supposed to have a more comic-book like feel to it. I've been a reader since I was a little kid.

This took about twenty hours or so. I'm still learning the programs. This was done in Painter X with a tiny bit of finish work in Photoshop CS3.

Comments and Critiques are much appreciated. If there's any way you think that I could improve on future projects please give me your advice.


his hair ruined the look, remove the hairstyle rest is amazing ;)

binurojers
08-03-2008, 03:26 AM
Hi Christopher,
This is really a good start.My only critic is that the Tyre mark on the right of Hulk look like its out of place.Remember ,black is the strongest color,and should be very careful how we use it. Right now it is taking away a considerable amount of attention,disturbing the overall good composition.And you should have spend bit more time on Hulk's left shoulder.I know its a tough angle!!

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