Dead Space Like Level

[PredatorGSR]

Looking pretty good so far. Btw, the link in your sig doesn't work, its' putting cgsociety before your link and giving a 404 page. Your site works fine, its just the link that is bad.

[Armanguy]

not much of an update just a quick paintover to show what i want to do, back walls are just there as place holders so the gate didnt look out of place:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/Wall1-3.jpg

Paintover:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/Wall2.jpg

[ArtsyFartsy]

it's hard to feedback this cause it still needs a lot more work. Your textures are good, but you good add just a hint of color variety.

Looking at your notes, think about adding large objects that protrude into the space of the hallway as these will make the scene seem much more dynamic. Meaning, don't just draw surface decoration but large objects that break the flat walls and make the environment feel less like a box.

[Armanguy]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/Wall1-4.jpg

[mo0t]

Hey, I like the level the so far. Becareful of the repeating texture going around the wall, it's making it seem like its duplications all around. Break that up a little bit and you would be good to go, your texture work is great.

[Armanguy]

I removed the pillars and i think it looks alot better imo right now im just gonna plan it out beofre i do any work as choldon said in other forums I need to use more ref to make this look more interesting i would also appreciate any pain over from anyone with ideas but right now the paint over i have done seems more like something out of dead space. what i didnt inlclude is the blood :P

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/Wall1-5.jpg

Paint over:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/Wall2-1.jpg

[Armanguy]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/Wall1-6.jpg

just one question the floor is really blurry how would i go about fixing that?

[mo0t]

Check your mip-mapping

[LaughingBun]

wow this is looking really nice! i think the angle your using is making the floor blurry.

[Armanguy]

my computer sucks it took 4 hours to put three objects into place and put in the lighting i cant believe how slow my computer is argghhhhhh! anyways :

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/Wall1-7.jpg?t=1217619364

[salman-fas]

looking really good but tweek the drop off setting of the spot lights.

[Armanguy]

fixed the lighting mostly darkened the left side:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/Wall1-8.jpg

[lowlevel21]

looking good armanguy...i think to add a dramatic effect try opening the doors alittle and give a strong white light emmiting from cracked door...i dunno maybe it'll add that dramatic effect to the scene, but very good job bra...1 thing also, the light you have now hanging over the pipes are abit too strong, you can see the hard edge its giving off on the door way and walls, add some volumetrics or blur it off some how, and give either a different texture to your crates(stacked boxes to the left) or add a bright emblem/logo to off set the the dark texture it has, cause if you didnt have a light over them you really wouldn't notice them...but good job, keep bustin it out! :buttrock:

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