mr. robber

[Artician]

I like the contrast and lighting. I hope you add details and definition as you go, so it's sharper and clearer. It's very stylized, and stylized peices are harder to critique because I don't know what you're going for. However I would say that the robbers outstretched hand could use a little more definition. The angle of the fingers look a little odd. Also with the smaller character on the right, it's hard to make out what he is doing with his hands. It looks like he shoudl be holding something in his left, but at that point it's too fuzzy to make out.
Minor criticism. Someone with better sense of color might be able to give you better feedback, but I like it so far.

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