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lorenzotknight
07-22-2008, 06:48 AM
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Title: We shall conquer this world boys !
Name: Lorenzo T Knight
Country: Hungary
Software: BodyPaint, Maya, mental ray

I wanted to create a semi cartoony scene with lots of color and light, featuring a little alien family in an earthy atmosphere.
Everything was modelled, rigged and rendered in maya, the textures were made in photoshop and body paint and because i worked on it alone in my spare time only it took a really loooong time to finish...but here it is hope you like it :)
francomanko
07-22-2008, 09:20 AM
you need to work on the composition of the scene more. Its quite confusing, and the main characters aren't standing out. for example, you have positioned the little Alien right in front of the other one and as a consequence they tend to merge into eachother.

Your poses could be a lot more interesting too.
LS Knight
07-22-2008, 10:51 PM
Hey brother, :wavey:


I agree with frankomanko. Just move the little guy forward or back.
coffee-turtle
07-23-2008, 02:41 AM
Is there a reason the DELL logo on the monitor is a mirror image?
The wallpaper on the monitor is nicely detailed. Do you have that picture outside of this piece of art?

Interesting concept, though. The still objects are true to life.
lorenzotknight
07-23-2008, 07:33 AM
thnaks for the replies.They have been really helpful and I intend to try
these suggestions as soon as I can. Thanx again
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