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vinced

07-20-2008, 06:20 PM

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Title: Shaft
Name: Dirk Vincenz
Country: Germany
Software: CINEMA 4D

This shall be some kind of shaft. The intention was to create some dark monotonous mood.
I`ve done the whole modelling in MoI and textured the scene in c4d.

I`ve tried to improve things here and there but in the end it got worse, so i left the image as it was at first. Honestly i can`t see this image anymore ;-)

Hope you like it.
C&C welcome

Dirk

zukezuko

07-21-2008, 09:58 AM

Like the dark atmo you made here
although there is no subject or concept/story here, the room by itself is interesting
though 1 thing bugs me is the number of lights, 1st thing that draws my eyes are the bright wall lights, in my opinion you could 2-4 of them, not to draw so much attention
hide a few lights or so.. its just me opinion.

Silverwing

07-21-2008, 06:09 PM

Good materials and lighting. I like the mood of your picture.
Nice modeling and pov too. Thumbs up!

vinced

07-23-2008, 06:11 PM

Thanks for your comments.

@zukezuko
That`s a good point. My images always lack an interesting illumination. Mostly they are too evenly lit. I`ll have to invest some more time into good lighting.

Cheers
Dirk

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