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[Silver Sliver]

Maybe the arms in the first scene are too thin...

[Teyon]

I'd have to agree, the forearms are too thin.

[l-a-akira]

Its coming along great! Cant wait to see it finished. :)

I agree with Teyon and Silver, the forearms look a bit too thin.

[The-black-tulip]

Ok... Right

Thanks 4 u comments, Messieurs.

[p0lym0rph]

tres jolis boulots,mais dans le modeling feminin,les avant bras sont trp maigre et petit,ainsi que les mains et les pieds

[Facial Deluxe]

Je vois ce que tu veux dire par "heavy", ça doit être monstrueux en temps de calculs... Mais c'est hyper beau.

[The-black-tulip]

Thanxx,

The forearms is updated... notice, the palm of the hands is not made yet .

The feet are indeed too small ... but the toes are not finished yet ...

I will have to break up the scene into some layers because the scene finished will contain several million polygons.

Facial Deluxe : What is Heavy 3d ? It's the name which I give to a experimental scene...

---> Hight Elements And Vibes to Yield a movie scene ... or ( H.E.A.V.Y 3d )


http://users.chello.be/cr28218//Artworks/Female_Update.jpg


Thanx for your Com.

[Facial Deluxe]

Argh, les wips disparaissent à une vitesse vertigineuse, j'ai mis un temps fou à te retrouver...
Bien reçu ton PM:)
J'adore le rendu, l'effet "3couches décalées" donne une impression de relief façon vieux films (mais en moderne là).

[JacquesD]

Nice start for you female & male model! :)
In my opinion... you still have proportions and anatomy problems.

-The forearm is still too thin and the hand is too small.
-The lower jaw of the male head doesn't look correct.

I couldn't say more as pics are rather small... a front view of the female body and a bigger one of the male face would help.

I personally like the last pic... I don't really see what it is but It looks cool.

Keep on and peace dude. ;)

PS: The girl's face look like Christina a bit... am I wrong?

[The-black-tulip]

Hi Ripper, Wassup maaann...

Thanks for u critics .

4 the forearms, I prefer to finish the wrist and the palm of the hands before modifying their size .

Maybe the hands is a little to small but I'm not sure, I believe that the problem comes from the length of the fingers . I will look that later.

Yes, The lower jaw was to small but I' ve modified this problem. ( Thanxx )

If you recognized the features of Christina, I'm glade, because indeed I used certain features of his face. :)

Last still: there is still much work on this model but Thanxx.

Ciao and peace on the world.

[JacquesD]

I'm fine thanks...

You maybe right about the hands... It may be the length of the fingers, you should post other views and close up to see it better.

About the lower jaw of the male head... that's what I meant:
http://users.skynet.be/fa008785/LowerJaw.jpg

About the female... I knew there's something about Christina in her face. :)

Keep on updating. ;)

Cheers.

[3DArtZ]

looks really neat and clean. good model so far.
crit, the foream should be longer than the upper arm.
Mike Fitz

[The-black-tulip]

Hi everyone,

Here is the Space-suit Update...



http://users.chello.be/cr28218//Artworks/Space_Suit_Update_00.jpg

[Pufferfish]

Nice stuff! Incredible details!

I like the "off focus" effect in your images..how did you do that? ...by displacing color channels?

[Facial Deluxe]

:applause: Awesome work !!!!!!!

[JacquesD]

Nice details and outfit...
Some folds look weird though.

Keep on. ;)

PS: Can the helmet glass open?

[The-black-tulip]

Thanks again for your comments and critics...

Pufferfish : Yes, It's exactly what I do. :)
I move the blue an red color channels in photoshop.


Ripper : Yes, The helmet glass can be open...
I will make a update with the open helmet glass if you want ...

[l-a-akira]

Beautiful! Seems to be coming along very well. My only comment is the same as Jacques. Some of the folds look odd.

[p0lym0rph]

tres joli boulot sur le scaphandre:thumbsup:

[The-black-tulip]

Hi everyone,

A small update before taking my holidays ... :)

Happy vacation. ;)

T.B.T.



http://users.chello.be/cr28218//Artworks/Male_Face_Update_V05_00.jpg

[JacquesD]

Nice update or your character!
I would maybe work a bit on the base of the noze and arch of the eyebrows... good expression in his eyes so far... nice lipstick :)

Have you got a side view of it?

Keep on.

PS:Have a nice vacation.

[l-a-akira]

Keeps getting better and better. Can't wait to see the final. Though Organics can often be subjective, I'd like to throw in my 2 cents.

1. The right side of the eyebrow ridge directly above the right pupil seems to cave in a bit too much. Or maybe the left and right side around it is a little too puffed out.

2. Again, the right eye socket area. The area just to the right of the eye where the ridge slopes down into the cheecks seems a bit too flat and/or wide.

Have a great time in Antibe.
Cheers. :)

[The-black-tulip]

Thnx 4 your comments and critics...

Ok, I will adjust the base of the noze and arch of the eyebrows when I'll go back .


Later...

[Levitateme]

good god all them images are amazing. what are you using to render? you have that 3d image look to your work how are you doing that? is that some effect your putting on after you render? your suit looks photoreal, it all looks amazing, but wow. what do you redner with? thats all relaly fantastic. oh yah your model fo the hand the thumb is weird looking. sorry but other than that wow.

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