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CarlS
07-18-2008, 05:59 PM
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Title: Bike Bench
Name: Carl Sanden
Country: USA
Software: 3ds max, mental ray, Photoshop

This is a submission for a local art contest. It is a bike rack to be made by local metal artists. I used 3dsmax 7, photoshop and Artrage. I'll take any critique people want to offer.
Gamato
07-19-2008, 05:22 PM
i noticed that the word "poor" is not the right spelling.

pour?
:D
gtvfx
07-19-2008, 05:42 PM
I think that it looks good. The design looks like it will hold up without any problems. The one thing that is poorly executed in this is that everything on the canvas blends together. Your three vignettes should stand out from the background to draw attention to them. And the text on the left gets lost because it just sinks right into the background. So, overall it's a nice piece, I just don't think that it reads very well.

Cheers,
GT
CarlS
07-19-2008, 06:39 PM
Here are some more concepts. I did all these over the weekend for funsies. Seems I can't get anything made without spelling something wrong!

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f285/cenorjay/Bike_Blossoms_01.jpg


http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f285/cenorjay/Bike_Rings_01.jpg

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f285/cenorjay/Flat_Iron_Flowers_01.jpg
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