View Full Version : Vanda Warrior
Oramyst 07-16-2008, 07:45 AM http://www.oramyst.com/images/SH_resize.jpg
Game Character Concept. Freehand Illustration.
The Oramyst Team
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Artician
07-17-2008, 04:00 AM
This is looking good, however the lighting on the subject doesn't match the environment at all, it seems. It also doesn't help that the background is so blurred while the subject is in focus. If you want to give a good feel of focal distance at least give the environment that's at the same distance as the subject the same level of sharpness.
Anatomy and proportions are good. The only other thing that stands out is that her outfit might benefit from some more detail, instead of being entirely gray.
Overall it's a nice image.
alicelefay
07-17-2008, 09:24 AM
I think that the character is stunning, really a great job :)
The details are wonderful, specially on the weapon.
Just one thing: the cape seems a little bit "fake" to me, in contrast to the high realism of the weapon. I have no idea if you wanted this effect (in this case, sorry^^), but this is what I realized when looking at it.
Btw...let us see more :)
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