11 second club WIP

[DevIII]

11 second club? so you have 11 seconds todo the funniest short?
does it have to be a sound bite from a movie?

I liked most the frames.
the character in the end seemed out of place, maybe fore/back-grounding it earlier so we can see him before the end, even if he doesn't do/say anything specific.

I like the transistion from the mime to the monolog, and it played abit with my expectation which is always nice with a short.

im really not to sure what else to say, its kind of hard to tell where its going/whent. maybe when its in motion it will be a bit clearer or resolved.

[KyleG]

Thanks for the comments DevIII, heres info on the 11 second club
http://www.11secondclub.com/home/FAQ/

[DevIII]

interesting competition, best of luck.

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