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KyleG
07-13-2008, 04:23 AM
So I've had a little extra time this month so I decided to enter the 11 second club contest. This is IP/rough blocking, comments and critiques are welcome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mdWwhXfOcz0


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DevIII
07-13-2008, 08:59 AM
11 second club? so you have 11 seconds todo the funniest short?
does it have to be a sound bite from a movie?

I liked most the frames.
the character in the end seemed out of place, maybe fore/back-grounding it earlier so we can see him before the end, even if he doesn't do/say anything specific.

I like the transistion from the mime to the monolog, and it played abit with my expectation which is always nice with a short.

im really not to sure what else to say, its kind of hard to tell where its going/whent. maybe when its in motion it will be a bit clearer or resolved.

KyleG
07-13-2008, 02:39 PM
Thanks for the comments DevIII, heres info on the 11 second club
http://www.11secondclub.com/home/FAQ/

DevIII
07-13-2008, 06:20 PM
interesting competition, best of luck.

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