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SeHZaDe
07-10-2008, 11:51 PM
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Title: My YP-K5 MP3 Player
Name: Gürâni Gürhan Günay
Country: Germany
Software: 3ds max, mental ray, Photo-Paint

I'm trying to learn creating detailed models. So this is one of my first complete model without hiding any corner! I'm sure there are many mistakes but, thats why this picture is here for your critics, huh?! :)

So, C&C are welcome!
Thanks . . .
Adam-Bomb
07-11-2008, 07:40 PM
Hey I think it looks great! The wire on the right looks a bit too stright but thats no big deal. The biggest thing I see is that the screen doesn't look like its giving off light. It looks a bit dull like the texture has no self illumination. Overall its really well done though. You should be proud.
SeHZaDe
07-11-2008, 07:56 PM
The biggest thing I see is that the screen doesn't look like its giving off light. It looks a bit dull like the texture has no self illumination.

Good point! Thank you. :bowdown:
I forgot it . . . :blush:
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