View Full Version : animation: Floyd and Dancing Tofu
drewantarctic 05-27-2003, 03:35 AM check out poor floyd. guy cant seem to get a decent meal in town. i finished this december at ringling school of art and design.
floyd animation (http://www.rsad.edu/~aarnold/floydrest.mov)
and visit my web site.
www.rsad.edu/~aarnold
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drewantarctic
05-28-2003, 06:10 AM
alright everyone, hack away, please. i know you guys can shell me out a strong crit. take it away fellows...
fattyLees
05-29-2003, 08:23 PM
I'm not a huge fan of tofu either...
Cool animation...
a couple of things I would comment on are his hands and when he looks for the waiter.
His fingers bend back WAY too far when he taps them on the table...your fingers can't do that without breaking and it stands out to me. make it more subtle and use the wrist more instead of bending the fingers back so far. Also, when he looks back at the waiter, I think maybe you need to have him only look off screen and not at the viewer. Maybe more of a hold when he has his arm in the air trying to get the waiters attention... just a thought though.
Cool stuff though...what is this for by the way?
Eric
McSpirit
05-29-2003, 11:16 PM
He's chest moves a bit wird :shrug:
and i think it still need a bit of work on the story-line :wip:
But beside that great animation... the facial animation is very good :bounce:
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