still: showerhead

[superfly18]

Welcome to cgtalk.com bro!

Haha...looking good, that's something you def don't see everyday on the forums.

Now, on to the pic. Its good i dunno, its interesting. The "wire" of the showerhead appears more detailed and expensive than the shower head itself.

The tiles are green close up. ewww...

And lastly, the watering is just not inviting me in. Gets the job down, but i think you could work on it.

Good job anyways, why dontcha pop that sucker in a bathroom and stuff, that'd look good.

[kiaran]

I've never seen anything like this before, I like it alot. I have a couple of comments on it:

- The material on the hose looks really cool!
- The tiles are really small. Since there are only two items in this composition (shower head and tiles) you must be very carefull to keep there relative scales accurate in order to keep the illusion. As it is now either your shower head is about four feet long or the tiles are abnormaly tiny.:shrug:
- The composition is a little confusing. We know we are looking 'up' at the shower head only because the water is falling on the camera. BUT, at the same time the hose looks to be resting on the wall, like there is two gravity sources.

This is already a unique still-life piece and I like it but with a little extra work I think it could be much more. Consider balance the compostion by moving the camera so that it doesn't look like the wall continues for a very long ways or try adding a ceiling.

Good luck.:)

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