Sunbathing lady WIP

[LucentDreams]

she was leaning back further before wasn't she? and her head (especially hair) was very different, nice render overall.

[derwolpertinger]

really sweet render.:p a few crits anyway: blur the background a lot, the horizon almost cuts her face in half. and the face seems to flat to me. otherwise, really cool pic there!! :thumbsup:

[EyeKyu]

Legs look so realistic, awesome job man. But, I think it'd look better if you pulled her jaw back a bit.

[Siddhy]

nice model :) but what has happened to her left arm?

[AdamT]

Nice work. For some reason I wish the vest/jacket had short sleeves though. Maybe you didn't *quite* finish, eh? ;)

[gmask]

Originally posted by AdamT
Nice work. For some reason I wish the vest/jacket had short sleeves though. Maybe you didn't *quite* finish, eh? ;)

Hmm it is kind of odd attire for the beach

[JIII]

she is a model at the beach guys come on, its not supposed to be totally real.

while that is a very nice model, is there a color version, or is sepia tone your render of choice?

[kiwi]

Ya I remember that model :thumbsup:



Nice job :thumbsup:



She looks almost uncomfortable,maybe try bending her head back so her face is looking up into the sun,so she looks like the experience is enjoyable.



Stu.

[Deestrakt]

I really like it :thumbsup:

she's really cute. body & lightning are great !

about the shadows under the main character + chair, did u make a combination of area + hard shadows ?

only crit : the relief around the biceps area is a lil strange (between the biceps and the elbow).

[sanciok]

Thanks for your comments guys!
I've just re-started the WIP on her!!!

Kai: Yes u're right on both!
Siddhy: Ehm... what do you mean?
JIII: actually i like the sepia render... i'm considering to use it for the final one!
KIWI:
She looks almost uncomfortable,maybe try bending her head back so her face is looking up into the sun,so she looks like the experience is enjoyable.
I'll try this out!

Deestrakt : It's a radiosity rendering with a distant light with Hard shadows!

[malc0lm]

Oh, sexy moma!
very nice, makes me feel all summery ;)

One thing striked me though (could just be me), the left elbow
area seems to have some weirdness too it.

Great job overall!

[flingster]

anybody i should know....!!!

well she's errh HOT...sitting there all alone on the beach.
i like the sepia render style..and like the simplicity of the composition...would like to see her sitting more to the right hand side of the image...same camera angle...but then more space to the left of the image...just a thought...kinda wide screen mode with her more to the right of image.

her left elbow region is messed up bud.

top job though..never seen her before sorry i missed that one!
heh heh.:thumbsup:

[Siddhy]

i meant the elbow region as flingster said. anyway, it's a great model :bounce:

[sanciok]

Ah... i got it!
Maybe is the bone deformation on the elbow area that need some tweacking!

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