CGTalk - 54 f100 Composite

Psybah

05-26-2003, 08:20 PM

this is my first model of a car, and my first attempt at compositing it on a scene. I am satisfied, but not completely and I am not sure why. I have a feeling it may be the size of the truck in relation to the scene. Can anyone point me in the right direction? thanx..

composite here (http://jdart.net/renders/compositeweb.jpg)

roosterjm2002

05-26-2003, 09:16 PM

I think the size is wrong, its too small...the concrete area by the curb is probably no more than 2 feet...and its half of your truck...

It also looks to clean..and the lighting is too hard...

Plus you have a late 90's GMC truck in the background...

Plus you might wanna simulate some grain...

just my thoughts, your truck alone is better than anything i have made...so im no pro

ssyed

05-26-2003, 10:42 PM

It is most definately too SMALL, also it seems to be floating, i think the shadow might be too hard which is why its causing it to look like that try may be using a diffuse light or something thats for 3dsmax but i don't know what u could do other than that it looks great,
but since it seems ur going for the "old photo" kind of look the fairly new truck kind of makes it wierd

janabsolin

05-27-2003, 08:48 AM

Looks like a big plastic toy...

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