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Cynical_Saint
05-26-2003, 07:47 PM
Still working on my facial modeling. I 'think' I am happy with the model unless anyone can point out some real bad proportional errors.

Working on the face texture. As I have NO experience in 2D, this is quite an undertaking for me.

Any and all help would be appreciated.

http://home.carolina.rr.com/cynical/images/update_front.jpg http://home.carolina.rr.com/cynical/images/update_side.jpg http://home.carolina.rr.com/cynical/images/update_persp.jpg
katon
05-26-2003, 08:26 PM
i think the bridge of the nose looks a little thin and the nose looks a little long, i think you need to go back and look at those two things defenintly
Cynical_Saint
05-27-2003, 03:48 AM
You were absolutely right about the nose. I had been working so long on a texture that I overlooked the simplest of things.

I updated the texture to have a little more...well...texture.
Updated the nose, repositioned the eyes and made them wider, updated the bottom lip and chin(a little).

Look better? Any more suggestions?

http://home.carolina.rr.com/cynical/images/update_persp1.jpg
Cynical_Saint
05-27-2003, 03:55 AM
http://home.carolina.rr.com/cynical/images/update_side1.jpg http://home.carolina.rr.com/cynical/images/update_front1.jpg
Cynical_Saint
05-29-2003, 05:04 AM
Another Update. I better finish this thing soon because it looks like you guys are tired of the faces in this place. :)

I reshaped the top of the head, closed her mouth, little texture work, gave her some more volume to her cheeks, and reduced the size of her cheek-bones to a more realistic shape.

More suggestions! Please...I am teaching myself this stuff so I need all of the help I can get. Feel free to comment on the texture too as I really want to make a more photorealistic skin.

Thanks

http://home.carolina.rr.com/cynical/images/update_persp2.jpg
Cynical_Saint
05-29-2003, 09:01 PM
No comments?? Help me out guys...
Mr. Nice Guy
06-05-2003, 10:29 PM
It looks good so far.

Show some wire;)

Maybe you could take a look at the sharp lines. It looks now that she is very skinny. Bones with skin. This is what I see in the front view of your render. The side view look good. It also look that there is a little hole next to her lips.

Keep on going, the maps is going the good way.:thumbsup:
Keith Young
06-06-2003, 07:32 AM
Nice start. It's kinda hard to visualize until you get her some ears, but I overlayed a reference image (from Drawing the Head and Hands by Andrew Loomis (http://www.fineart.sk/anat.htm) ) and it looks like the nose may be a little on the long side and the mouth too low going by that (see below)...

http://webpages.charter.net/spanki/images/cs_crit.jpg
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