CGTalk - Progressive Walk

GohanLex

07-07-2008, 02:13 PM

Hello:)
My 1st post here.

I'm practicing my animation skills.
Please take a look at this walk and give me some critiques on how I can improve it.

Perspective (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8111464674539029831&hl=en)

Side (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=5346420496380958521&hl=en)

Front (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8368686860790489014&hl=en)

Thanks for watching it.

aesir

07-07-2008, 05:41 PM

it looks really good. I have no issues with it.

theflash

07-07-2008, 10:45 PM

It looks pretty good already. What I think can be improved is the stiffness in pelvis and shoulders. You might want to loosen up there. Also head moves because of the torso rotation right now (it seems like it), you might want to rotate it independently as well. Not too much though. I hope this helps. I really like the loosenes in the hands.

GohanLex

07-08-2008, 09:51 AM

Thanks aesir and flash.

theflash:About the head- yes..thats the way I made it.
The head is supposed to move independently? OK..didnt know that. Should I make it move opposite to the upper body and in sync with the hips/cog?
Shoulders:Got it. I can work on this.
Pelvis:Could you be a little more specific about this? Is it stiff throughout the animation or in some particular axis?

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