Spidey Concept Art

[Irate-Velociraptor]

you need to work on his anatomy. His wrists are more then twice the size of his neck and his feet are way too big

[LuisPe20]

Thanks for the critic! Actually thats just how I draw my cartoons (Big hands, feet, wrists), its kind of weird but I´m not aiming to do an anatomically correct version, its just my stylized version. Still, with that in mind, I´m really happy with these drawings (Hence concept art) but I will post the finall version when its ready. Thanks anyway!

[VISEone]

There is nothing wrong with your cartoony way of the anatomy - but you need to keep an eye on the angle of your left arm upper/lower arm/hand - it seems twisted too unnaturally.

everything else looks promising!

... and to Irate-Velociraptor: You should use your advise to your own WIP-thread which is over 2 years old...:wise:

[CybrGfx]

you need to work on his anatomy. His wrists are more then twice the size of his neck and his feet are way too big
... and to Irate-Velociraptor: You should use your advise to your own WIP-thread which is over 2 years old...:wise:Who died and made YOU the posting police, VISEone? One does not need to have a current WIP thread in order to post their observations when someone ASKS for critiques and comments...

LuisPe20, What is the "style" you are attempting to convey? The oversized appendages look designed for small children. Is this your intent, to create a type of "lil' kids" Spyderman fan art?~C

[VISEone]

well I didn't mean it in a rude or bad way - even if it sounded rude - so I apology! :shrug:
What I thought was that Irate should work on his thread where a lot of people tried to help him to improve with their comments - but nothing happened - even after 2 years he didn't really respond to the comments...
and instead of giving a simple answer like you need to work on his anatomy. His wrists are more then twice the size of his neck and his feet are way too big without giving specific pointings - he should rather use his advice to his own workings.

But still - this was kinda sarcastic - I didn't mean it in a really bad way.

Back to topic. I think LuisPe20 has a special cartoony style and therefor you can't say: work on the anatomy - here you have to be much more specific to point out the mistakes that LuisPe20 made on SPIDEY

and it's good to see you back Cybr!!!

[LuisPe20]

Well, thanks again to everyone for their c & c. There really is´nt a specific "Style" its just me trying to figure out my "own style". I guess you could say it kind of a more cartooney for kids kind a way. The thing is, I want to make drawings simple but cool ( Which I have not achieved yet) so thats why im trying out some different looks, hopefully I will be posting a second wip in a few since Im still working on it. Like I said, it is a WIP after all jaja.

Thanks again!

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