still: Garage

[pixelranger]

Nice, stylistic garage. Reminds me a bit of Full Throttle and other Lucas Games.

Maybe you could add some details that really would lift the scene, but not neccesarliy take a long time doing. Think like a set dresser. Add a basket net, some dead leaves and rocks on the ground along the walls of the garage. Maybe some loose trash by the side of the garbage can. And maybe tilt the garbage can lid.
But all in all, a very nice garage. Can't wait to see it textured and lit.

[LordShaitan]

Nice stuff, i loved the paintgs you posted in the past (The wessel things). I checked out the webpage and you have some quality paintings on their, i especially love the parrot.

Anyhow, yeahi cant wait to see this textured, look great so far.

[PaulSchoeni]

Hey Thanks for the comments PixelRanger and LordShaitan. I appreciate the feedback. I think adding some more stuff to the garage scene really would help. And about the weasel things you mentioned, they are actually Lemmings. About 15-20 guys from my senior class have spent the last year creating a short called "Lemmings" that we hope a lot people will enjoy. We missed the Siggraph Electronic Theater deadline by just a little bit, but our school will have a booth at Siggraph and so we'll premiere it there on a big screen for all to see. Thanks for letting me shamelessly plug it.

Paul

[R.L.M]

great..
i think you can improve the tree a little..
he should spread a little more to all the directions.
and add some things on the floor like pixelranger said..

with the right textures is will be rocks! :thumbsup: :airguitar

[LordShaitan]

Lemmings, that what they were, completly slippted my mind at the time, will we be seeing the short after you show it at Siggraph?

[PaulSchoeni]

Yeah, we want to get as much exposure for Lemmings as possible, so I'll make sure to post a link to it then. All of the visuals are pretty much done, but its now having music and sound fx added to it. I think people will like it.

[RichSuchy]

I like it so far. I'd maybe make the basketball hoop out of kilter in an obvious way.

[PaulSchoeni]

Thanks for the encouragement Rich. Good idea about the hoop. I need to make it look like its been used, perhaps like its been dunked in a few times, huh.

Paul

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