Sunnyfields[wip-BigDL]

[Jaklyl]

ok, long time noch update. But here is one... ah... two

First try to make a tree
http://www.admininterface.net/skix/wiese_05.jpg

2nd try, with changes in mood and time.
http://www.admininterface.net/skix/wiese_6.jpg

How to make a real treeskin? Did anybody have an idea? This one is just procedual.

Thnx

[Remi]

Personally...I liked it without the tree....but if you must...check out leighs site and read up on uv's....cause the tree texture isn't working....good work though on the grass....keep it up:thumbsup:

[zuzzabuzz]

Yeah...the second tree.. :p
"What's that?"
"A tree!"
"How'd you make it?"
"Well, i took a block of wood and carved away everything that didn't look like a tree."

It's gorgeous though. I find that the pictures i like the most are the ones I made to escape my current environment (sunny on a rainy day)

The lensflare hurts my eyes...and it's always in the same area. You might try removing it.

[Jaklyl]

thnx =)

Ok let me recapitulate:
gras: :thumbsup
tree: :thumbsdow
treetexture: :thumbsdow
lensflare: :thumbsdow

Ok, I'll work on it. Will use the UV-Map on the tree.

Thnx to you two =)


grez
Jak

[Animator395]

Well I do like the grass, but I think it might be worth your while to space it out a bit and not make it so uniform. Kinda looks more like someones overgrown lawn now more than a field. Sky's looking okay. Tree needs work like you said and perhaps add something else to the scene to give us a middle ground. Flowers are kinda doing this now. Your scene is definately progressing.

[zuzzabuzz]

Originally posted by Jaklyl
thnx =)

Ok let me recapitulate:
gras: :thumbsup
tree: :thumbsdow
treetexture: :thumbsdow
lensflare: :thumbsdow

grez
Jak
I only criticised the tree texture. I thought the tree model was adequate for the scene. That "thumbs down" looks too sad for your picture.
:thumbsup:

[Jaklyl]

Thnx for your help. I've tried to walk on the street you showed up.
Heres the new pic:

http://www.schreck-net.de/wiese_7.jpg

Sorry zuzzabuzz, the flare is still there... but I change it, when I change the BG, this one is just to show you how the final one will look like.

[zuzzabuzz]

Very pretty. The texture on the tree looks much better. I'll be interested to see what things look like with different times of day...but this picture looks fine.

[milqman]

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Jaklyl]

Thnx for your replys,
here is an update...
Still working on footprints around the tree and the bg.

http://www.schreck-net.de/wiese_8c.jpg

hope you see the process =)

[Jaklyl]

'nother update
http://www.schreck-net.de/wiese_9b.jpg

[Remi]

First thought...why through the bike in there and ruin the image...I would just completely remove it...there's no reason to have it in there...I'd rather see a blanket or something like that...the colors and the model of the bike aren't comparable to the scene in my opinion...it's come a long way though...great job:thumbsup:

[jmcalpin]

wow nice image.

The crit I have, well two are the color is too uniform. need some brown grass, maybe a flower or two. that kind of thing. The other is the leaves seem too dense. should have a branch or two with leaves poking out or have some gaps in the leaf cover. Basically break up that ball of leaves.

j

[Jaklyl]

Ok, thnx to you all... here is the final version of my pic.

http://www.schreck-net.de/wiese10.jpg

Do you think I should post it on finished work?
I'm not shure about that...

C&C very wellcome!

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