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Ash-o

06-29-2008, 12:08 PM

http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/247812/247812_1214741295_medium.jpg

Title: classic guitar
Name: Ashraf Al HArbi
Country: Oman
Software: 3ds max, mental ray, Photoshop

hi every body.
i want to know your comments in this piece .
i did it for my friend ( little challenge ) . i use 3ds max 9 , & mental ray for render , and photoshop for final color correction.

ahmedmax

06-29-2008, 05:31 PM

very good work man 4*from me:applause:

UniqueCharacter

06-29-2008, 09:59 PM

Yeah I don't get the low rating - 4 stars from me as well. Lighting could use some work to show off the model quality. Can you post a wireframe?

Ash-o

06-30-2008, 05:00 AM

thanks to ypur replay guys....
this it the wire frame and some test renders

http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=129798 :wip:

archishark

07-01-2008, 04:14 AM

I like the design, and specially the Headstock ! it makes the guitar so modern.

Nice rendering, but I think u should use different color ranges for the model and the walls and minimize the blue/violet ambient light so the model can be clear, and it can be detached from the background.
The white wood of the body seems to be blurry, i think u can reduce the blurr and make some reflection (using an hdri environnement too will improve reflection and make itmore relist)
And for the blue wall at left u must use an UVW mapping :beer: -laban mou charab :cool:-

Good luck and nice work !!

nicon

07-01-2008, 06:17 PM

The strings are wrong on the nut. They should be evenly spaced. Also they would read better, if they were regular light colour.
Otherwise, good render!

Ash-o

07-01-2008, 08:16 PM

thx to all you guys ..:rolleyes:
nicon - you now i didn't even see the guitar i front of me .. i don't no the close up details
..
nice to see your comment :beer: laban mou charab :applause:

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