field girl, James Wolf Strehle (2D)

[MoonVisionStudio]

I like the lighting and the two strands of hair still on her back.

[Lman]

Fantastic

:)
love the light and the mood,
very Artistic and creative,

almost like a dream

well done keep up the great work,

Regards
Liam

[jameswolf]

hey thanks! glad you both like it :)

[MarcGoecke]

Hello!
I like the colors and the atmosphere and I also wouldn't complain much about the atonomy. The only thing that does not seem really harmonic (imho) is the composition. But I can not really say why. Maybe I have to think about it a little longer.

But good work! :)

cheers
Marc

[jameswolf]

cool, thanks for the crit, certainly appreciate it, I'd love to hear any additional thoughts if you do figure out what bothers you about the comp :)

[TMArtist]

James,

Really nice lighting and composition on this. I think you've achieved what you set out to do. My only crit or desire for improvement for this would be the rendering of the leaves/foliage at her feet in the foreground. The strokes look a little too whimsical. Perhaps rendering the leaves in the foreground more completely (fully highlights, detail) to match the girl would help the depth on the ground element a little more. You might also try introducing a mist to obscur things on the bottom of the piece (my lazy man's approach). Anyway, this is a very nice painting ... I just wanted to give you some food for thought. That's all.

Regards,

[jameswolf]

great advice :) yeah the leaves were a bit neglected heh heh, the lazy mans approach sounds like a perfect solution to remedy this situation lol. if i have time i'll definitely go back into it. thanks for the advice :)

[Greatto]

Hello Mate! Girl looks so especial, because of the color you used! light and shadow works just perfect! just one critique about composition, but itsn't so important ;)
I always recieve great feeling after your works!

as always perfect mark from me :)

[nwiz25]

one of my favs! :love: everything is beautiful .. yup .. about the leaves thingy, that would push it more to the top .. but otherwise, colors .. lighting .. mood .. love it!! .. i wish i could render stuff like this .. u rock dude! :buttrock:

[jameswolf]

! y thank you sir :)

[Samuraikuroi]

Iam sorry I had not seen this before. The light is outstanding!

[jameswolf]

:) yea i'm very happy with how the lighting came out. makes me want to do a similar piece but i'll have to think of something a bit different.

[phoenix]

very nice and lovely colors


regards

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