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TuLe
05-24-2003, 05:55 PM
Hello everyone!

Well here's my finished (maybe things will change after...) Tao Khan scene...!

Can you please say something about?
... anyway here it goes!!!

http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/taokahn_wip6.jpg

Any words... BAD, GOOD, WHATEVER, would thrill me...!

:Thanks:
TuLe
05-24-2003, 06:42 PM
Damn... 30 views and no replys!!!

That's it for me them!
P_T
05-24-2003, 06:53 PM
im no expert on 2D painting but here's wat i think... it looks kinda flat, the outline of the ears merges with the shadow behind it... the highlight/shadow is not consistent to the light source (the lamp), the cracks on the rock looks more like veins... and why does the beads have that chinese character for "middle"?
Psycholink
05-24-2003, 07:14 PM
Nice + good work! :thumbsup:
how longtime to make?
Rainwhistler
05-24-2003, 11:58 PM
Hey, it turned out good I think. though I would have focused more on the character. he's the one that needs detail. =) love the changes to the mouth and the lower jaw.:thumbsup:
iBlue
05-25-2003, 12:27 AM
needs:

-shaper edges

-Brigher highlights

-darker shadows

-More details shadows and highlights


Dont stop now though, you can still do so much! :)
liQu1d
05-25-2003, 12:36 AM
looks like a member of the wu tang clan :D
quite nice :)
Hash!
05-29-2003, 01:21 PM
Your image is kool!........but there's one or two thing that could be fixed........Like iblue said....it's too blurry and needs sharper edges....dont be afraid to put sharp outlines and big shadows....
....the shadows and the lights areas gives the volume to the objects....that's why your character looks a bit flat.....define your shadows & lights...put more contrasts and that's it....you'll see a big difference.....
...another little thing.....the background seems to have more details than the character.......the principal subject is the guy...not the background......when i look at your image...my eye should stop on the guy first, and after go to the background.....define and sharpen a little more your character...put him back in the front!...he's the main subject!!!
.....your drawing is good!....dont stop!....2 or 3 little tweekings and your in!......keep posting your work!....


....and thanks again for your reply on my Little Skater!
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