Ada, Yanina Kucheeva (2D)

[Nickillus]

Great foreshortening and love the rich colour, Yanina.

[eonridr]

Despite the difficult pose u have chosen i think overall u have did quite well. I particularly like her face, the expression plus her right hand, fingers. ( our left) It tells alot about the story and really gives the sense of seduction 100%. The use of gold accessories, color and lighting are all nice touches too.

Critques wise i think the breast, her left hand ( our right) and her dress from her waist on, can be touched more to correct afew issues. I actually think abit of cropping like some 5cm out the bottom might be good cos the main attention is on top anyway and it could make it more centralised too. Just my view :). Do you have reference for the model btw? i think it will also help. +3 for me. gd job~

[arventur]

I used this photo as a reference for general pose
http://mjranum-stock.deviantart.com/art/Art-Nudes-C-8-79360620
(the breast and the left hand - eonridr, exatly what your critique is about;))

[Dianae]

Gorgeous colors and expression, I really love her pose, the hand adds a lot of movement in this painting. I think the waterfall (or is it a lighter rock formation ? ) could use a bit more work, eonridr has already mentionned other points :)

She reminds me of Milla Jovovich :)

Well done !

[hyure]

nice girl nice pose.Try to make detail better.so and I

[kiboSVK]

expression and pose coool job:buttrock:

[SirNeo]

She's great and lovely:thumbsup:

[nzrkiwi]

Hey i love the pose and the arm extension foreshortening is ecellentl it gives a 3D relief effect as if hand is coming out of the picture in 3D James Cameron take note here for your next movie:)

Well Done:) a Big 4.5 for me , Oh well if there was a .5 i add it:)

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