Warhammer Warriorpriest

[PadleSneg]

Something wrong with neck and head, may be, reason is too unnatural position. It'll be better if you bow the head in front, I think.

[azozel]

I think the eyes are too close together.

[Artan15]

Here's some good reference on a good scream. Look at the expression in the eyes and perceived "force" and emotion in the gesture. Try to tweak your expression to achieve a more lifelike gesture.

http://www.blindfiredesign.com/dropbox/leonidas.jpg

[Chupacabra]

Hey Marcus,

Pretty puckin cool!!
About the facial expression: it's THE most most difficult expression of all to get.
One tipp would be to push head a bit forward and pull chin back toward the throat, that'll surely help.

Other then that, killer work!

Best regards,

Khan

[tarcus]

Thank you all for your critics, I hope I got them fixed, here comes the next iteration.

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[Artan15]

Very nice changes to the face! The expression looks stronger now. I think you'll see a vast improvement if/when you pose the body to match the aggression in the face.

If you get an opportunity, you might want to check the proportions in the upper torso/shoulders area. Right now it looks evident the head and body are separate pieces.

It's coming along nicely overall. Keep it up!

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