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imjinoh
05-24-2003, 06:23 AM
hi, This is my first time putting my work here..

it's pretty crappy. I have a problem with weighting but fixing it..

Story is about creature following a person but later it happends to be the other way.. .. happens in alley at night(of course)

anyway, I'll take any critiques, but tell me reason for your critiques..

also I'll add the eyes, I got the reference for it but if anyonehas a idea what would be good, it would be awsome to tell me about it.

thanks

http://www.animillion.net/vfs/cgtalk01.jpg
http://www.animillion.net/vfs/cgtalk02.jpg
http://www.animillion.net/vfs/cgtalk03.jpg
http://www.animillion.net/vfs/cgtalk04.jpg
Windex
05-24-2003, 05:55 PM
WOW, THATS REALLY NICE, of course the head/teeth aren't finished, but the rest of the body (muscles/shapes) are VERY NICE

hope you'll finish it

later
elmasfeo
05-24-2003, 07:23 PM
i really like the model, specially arms and muscles, and the body shape is very original, but in my opinion the hands are too human, maybe some big claws would fit better... or just 4 fingers instead of 5, a lot of animals have only 4 fingers... but anyway, you are the master here, if you want it this way its ok, evrything is very good modelled...

For the head i have an idea : no eyes, just a biiiiig mouth with lots of teeth (i started a model of a monster that was this way)

keep working on it, it looks great!
Theta-Dot
05-24-2003, 11:23 PM
i love the mechanics of how the back works. Your model looks like something that really could exist. It's super cool. Finish that head!

=ThetaDot=
mwkmn
05-25-2003, 12:13 AM
This thing reminds me of the mutant creatures in the game 'Bio Hazard'

Cool model, I'm pretty sure it'll look nastier and freakier when fully textured :)
IDownupI
05-25-2003, 01:08 AM
lookes like resident, doom3 monster great work
DrakeX
05-25-2003, 01:27 AM
"it's pretty crappy"

oh COME ON if there's nothing i hate more it's when people have a great talent and think they're worthless at it. i would kill to be able to model half as good as you. :D

i love it, looks a bit like a toad/frog from the back (the way its legs are arranged and the short stubby tail thing). about all i can suggest is work on the head (tho i'm sure that's what you're doing next!!)
imjinoh
05-25-2003, 09:56 AM
Thank you all for replying at my work.. however you guys suck... not much critiques here huh?

just joking..

anyway thanks..

"elmasfeo" suggest me just don't put eyes but with a lot of teeth,

that was my orginal idea but for the story I found out that I need that freaking eyes so I'll put eyes on..

also hand was orginally my friends skeletor model hand so that might be why.. kk. I like to change but I have a lot of other things to do so that one probably wouldn't get changed.. thanks though.


thanks "mwkmn", "IDownupI" for a game reference, I'll check those out before moving on..

"DrakeX" thanks for encouragement and beginning of making this model, one of the reference I was kinda looking at was toad.

also for "Windex" my teeth aren't finished but head, .. I don't know..

I tried little more detailed head with eyes and shit but it didn't work out so I went back to old one which is the one at the top, but since everybody here and around me told me to put detail on head, I probably should, and I'm working on my 9th weighing right now so I'll try to post few test from previous and ones I'll do..

I'll update the model when I put the eyes and better teeth and detail for the head.. thank you all

have a nice day.
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