Some Scenes,need crit please.

[GenZ]

Here's an update to the lighting
I added some volume light comming from the windows and also applied what i think will be the final color correction.Anyway i'm really looking forward to the crits.
http://www.studiogmsoft.com/Filmi/Comp%202.jpg

[mister3d]

I think you could make your windows brighter - like a blue color that we could see their silouhette. You can definitely make lighting on the characters more pronounced, though it will be a bit of cheating, but anyway it's a cartoon style. Your floor texture looks a bit flat, maybe add some specular texture to break the uniformity and bump. In the second pic, the character that sits away from camera is not defined well, he needs a rim from candles. Either make one more candle from his left or cheat the lighting. Also I think the candle light can be brighter and more saturated. Once again the windows can be brighter, you can make some scary silouhettes outside - black-and-blue. The third is quite good to my taste, maybe a bit more definition to characters with rim lighting could be achieved.
Very good scenes in general, quality stuff.
About the windows, see for yourself: maybe the 1-st pic could benefit from silouhettes in the windows, but the 3-rd maybe not.

[GenZ]

Mister3d thanks man,i hope it looks better now.I followed your advice.
I'm going to work and finish this first scene then move into the other one.Thanks alot :)
http://www.studiogmsoft.com/Filmi/Comp%201.jpg
http://www.studiogmsoft.com/Filmi/ws.jpg

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